I lost my 33 year old son 11 days ago, and I'm searching for anything that makes sense. He had a wife and baby who will turn two in a few weeks. He worked hard. He was sick vomiting on the day he died and went in to bed to rest. He never woke up. The preliminary autopsy showed no cause. He had a few seizures in the past, but this makes no sense. I am grief stricken and broken.
I really do appreciate this comment, I'm glad that my poem has touched you. I am truly honored that you thought my poem was the best, so thank you! It's people like who make me write more poems.
Hi...I was just wondering, how do you kick someone out that you love? How do you deal with not seeing them on a daily basis after living with each other? How? I ask and wonder because my story is very much like yours, except without the baby.
I am so sorry. I lost my youngest of 7 children in May of 2016. He was gone 2 hours, almost home when he passed out at wheel of car. He was huffing computer duster. He went to WalMart and had gotten 6 more cans. We did not know this when he asked for the car. He said he had an interview. When I got to the wreck they were not helping him. They said he was gone, but on the scanner they had a pulse. I was there in 5 minutes. They would not let me see him. I wish I would have ran to him anyway. I should have tried to help him. The tow truck and one with the jaws of life took forever to show up.
Girl, I know how those foreign men are, but don't trust at all. They lie, cheat, steal and can't be faithful. I feel your pain and am sorry that happened to you. I have been used, hurt, lied to, and broken hearted by men before. I had cancer, and my health is not that good anymore. All I ever wanted was to be loved and accepted for who I am. My last boyfriend cheated on me with his ex of 22 years and told me he was still in love with her. Well I ended it. Got tired of her threats and her showing up at the door. But I know where you're coming from. God bless you. Don't give up; stay strong. Donna
Brenda, I know exactly how you feel. I'm in love with a guy who doesn't feel the same about me. He says he loves me but really doesn't show it much. He has never been abusive or physically hurt me. Just by his actions. We were together once before, and it didn't work out. But after 2 and 1/2 years we met by chance again. The feelings I had for him were still there, so like a fool we decided to give it one more try. What a dumb fool I was to fall for his charm knowing I would only end up getting my heart broken by him again. Yeah, it hurt as it was very recent. He only wanted a live-in maid, and I learned he was still in love with his ex-girlfriend of 22 years. I couldn't compare to her in his eyes. We slowly drifted apart. And we agreed it was best to end it before it was too late. I have no hate towards him. If only I'd have known, I'd have run the other way. I wish him well, but it still hurts... Wish you all the best. Donna
The way the poet described the life of a fisherman, his continuous effort and sacrifice to stand independent, and the powerful simile used, makes the poem a classic one.
Your poem was lovely, and your mum knows you don't mean it. You're her world. I have 3 boys, and they say hurtful things all the time.
I fell in love over a decade ago, and Henry has changed my life. I love him so much that I'd do anything for him. I can't ever imagine my life without him with, my true love. There'd be no me. He completely changed my life. My love for Henry runs through every part of my body.
Hi my name is Jaszmeanne. I just want to say thank you. I enjoy reading all of the stories shared. I have never been through this situation before. My fiancé just recently has been locked up, and it is going to be for quite some time. I love him with all my heart, and I hope you all don't mind if I share some of your poems with him. I'm not much of a writer, but some of these express exactly what I'm feeling. Thank you! Yours truly, Jaszmeanne
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