I just lost my grandma 17 of December 2023. I recently just had her funeral on 4 of January 2024 this year, I read this poem at her funeral she is with my Granddad and my Auntie and my Grandpa and my nana now.
This poem is how I feel every day. I never wanted to tell my mum about what I am going through but then she found out and started shouting at me. Saying I'm so stupid, saying that no one will ever love me and that I should kill myself with other things. She never cared about how I FELT and only cared about herself and what others would say. I wish I could just have someone that cares.
This poem is absolutely beautiful. I've deep down in the dumps lately and it is so hard to pull yourself out of it. it feels as though you're causing more pain for others by staying even though they always tell you it's the opposite. everything is so so hard, but i'll keep trying my hardest to wait for the sun. thank you for this.
Annabel Lee is a beautiful poem. It's such a touching poem. Edger Allen Poe is such a great poet
This poem is all my words failed to give my husband, stressed and overwhelmed, carried resentment from the past made this a heartfelt and deeply needed share with my very gentle and kind heart with which I am blessed to have at my side.
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Very fun to read. The rhymes and the cadence were great!
Great poem, brings out vividly what everyone at this age feels.
Thank you Richard for your comment. It means a lot to me.
Pat, I was absolutely thrilled to read your comment. Such a compliment from a poet with your talent is far more than I could have ever hoped for. It is so very good to know that you are indeed still out there and still sharing your immense talent with the world. An ability such as yours is what we all aspire to. You provide us all with a template and a benchmark.
Thank You My Friend for sharing your feelings with us all.
All The Very Best,
Seawolf
Very moving. Always good to read that someone has found light at the end of the tunnel. It's a bit like my poem Brighter Skies - knowing that when things are bleak and dreary there will be brighter skies ahead. Best wishes, Ann
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