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Suicide Poem

My uncle committed suicide the day after Christmas in 2007. It hurts so bad that he did what he did. I miss him terribly.. I don't and will never understand. To the people who are thinking about committing suicide you can live through anything. YOU can make a difference. Your family DOES love you, and friends. Even people you don't know...like me. Don't let your family go through the pain I feel right now and will for the rest of my life.

No More Pain

© Reann Roden
Crazy thoughts in his head,
all he wants is to be dead.
Inside he's screaming, feels a lot of pain,
day by day he's going insane.

His drinking increases he wont stop,
all that including smoking pot.
Drugs thinking for him, he can't think,
all he wants is for his mind to be blank.

He plans the day, says goodbye,
we think jail, but that was a lie.
He's screaming we don't hear him,
"This is the only way", he thinks,
"I'm not going back to the pin."
He tries to seek help, they don't listen, they didn't care how he felt.

That night he took a rope put it around his neck and choked.
No more pain, at least not for him,
all because of drinking and drugs I lost my best friend.

No more crazy thoughts in his head,
he got what he wanted...now he's dead.

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Rating: 4.17

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Published: 12/16/2009

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Hi hun I read your poem its beautiful in a very sad way, I bet your sick of hearing this but I'm sorry for what you've been through.

I went through a very similar experience my uncle killed himself the day before Christmas and my cousin killed himself a few days ago, its very sad and so difficult to accept when a loved one take their life.

All the best,
Caroline x

England Submitted on Wednesday, September 01, 2010

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