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This was written by my Brother when my Son passed away

Baby Danny

©  Christian Pennachietti
I was Conceived 9 months ago,
You thought of me as an egg,
I knew I was your son.

In your belly it was dark,
it was a scary place to be,
Then I Heard your voice and heart
and knew that you loved me.
You fed me and nourished me,
you carried me with no shame,
you did everything right for me
so please don't take the blame.

And then it came
September 21st the moment of my debut
it didn't go as we had planned
there was nothing you could do.
So you see its not your fault Daddy and Mommy
I hope you understand
nothing could change what had happened
because this was God's perfect plan.

And now I'm in heaven what wonders to be hold
I've sat beside the crystal sea
and walked the streets of gold.

So now I leave you mom and dad,
with this my final plea.
Thank you for this perfect life
You both have given to me.

See ya soon
Baby Danny
Baby Danny by Christian Pennachietti @FamilyFriendPoems

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Published: 7/10/2008

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this was a very beautiful and cleverly written poem.

heidi Posted on Wednesday, October 22, 2008

aww, this is very good. it made me cry!... I think this is proper sweet. clever choice of words.

mara Posted on Sunday, November 09, 2008

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