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Prison Poem

As with many kids, my son (now age 17) got mixed up with a bad bunch. He was caught in possession of drugs, never squealed on the other kids so he was the only one punished and was sent to a Youth Camp for 9 months. He came home, mixed with them again and committed a more serious crime... with them. This time he has been sent to a prison for 3 3/4 years.

Too Young For Bars...

© Ken Budden
Not a day goes by I don't think of you Son,
Locked up like an animal and still so young.
It doesn't seem right, it doesn't seem fair.
The sentence they gave you by putting you there.

But the crime has been done...you rejected advice,
And young as you are, you must now pay the price.
It breaks my heart knowing what you now face,
And I pray your return from that forbidding place.

The root of the problem was the company you kept,
Being out of a night-time while the rest of us slept.
You were easy to talk to, you fell in their trap,
And they stayed at home while you took the rap.

You were given a chance, to a Youth camp you went,
I was hoping that that was a 'lesson well spent'.
But when you came home, you met with them again,
Now look at the trouble you've got yourself in.

I remember your young days, teaching you right from wrong,
Telling you never be weak, and always be strong.
Your manners were perfect, they said so at school,
The girls all adored you and thought you were cool.

But it's never too late, I know this time you've learned,
Like the proverbial 'new leaf', it is you who has turned.
A new life awaits you, there are people who care,
Who love you and need you and will always be there.

Love, Dad xxx

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Rating: 4.79

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Published: 9/25/2008

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this poem describes my son and his present situation it's very moving. I want to send him a copy.

carmen Submitted on Sunday, September 28, 2008

I just like the poem and I can relate to how things happen by the choices we choose to make, I really like it because it is coming from his FATHER

Earlise Submitted on Tuesday, October 14, 2008

This poem did indeed touch me as my boyfriend is locked up at the moment his a 17 year old young boy who never wanted to listen to anyone always got away with everything until this time he got time.

I feel for this young boy as I know what he'd be going through & for his father.

Rachelle. Submitted on Saturday, December 27, 2008

This poem did indeed touch me as my boyfriend is locked up at the moment his a 17 year old young boy who never wanted to listen to anyone always got away with everything until this time he got time.

I feel for this young boy as I know what he'd be going through & for his father.

Rachelle. Submitted on Sunday, December 28, 2008

I simply wish my dad cared this much about me. Instead I have a dad who hates me and even turned me into the cops, it was nothing serious I just wish I had a dad who cared this much about me. Whatever you do continue loving your son even if it doesn't look like it he will see it. Trust me it counts...

Glen Casteel (AKA Jake Casteel) Submitted on Wednesday, February 25, 2009

This poem brought a tear to my eye, my son is locked up in a Spanish jail where the crime might not even go to court for two years, like you all we can do is love and support him through this time. I will send this to him with a Christmas card, I couldn't find the words to write myself. Thank You

Alison, Spain Submitted on Saturday, December 12, 2009

I stumbled on this poem by accident. It was just what I would have said to my son when he went through the same situation. He paid the price for all the others he did not tell on. Thankfully, he did turn his life around. He got his GED and enrolled in college. He also had a full time job. Then, a few months later he was in a diving accident and drowned at age 23. I missed most of his late teen and young adult years. Thank God we never grew apart. He always knew we loved him. He was able to straighten out his life and his relationship with his father before he died. Don't take life for granted. It is here one day and gone the next.

Kendra, New York Submitted on Tuesday, February 16, 2010

My son was shot multiple times when he was 17 and spent nine months in the hospital. He is now an amputee as a result. He didn't lead an honest life before then and I would've hoped that he would've learned but unfortunately he has landed himself in prison on a burglary charge, he is now 20. His father wants nothing to do with him and I'm in the middle. I can only hope and pray that he will change and he and his father can have a relationship. This poem just touches my heart to the fullest.

Deedee Submitted on Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Wow, this is like reading my sons story! He went to shock and did really well, I thought he had snapped out of that type of life. I was wrong obviously because he's been in county since January and is looking at a 1 1/3 to 4 yr bid! Loved the poem! Very well written!

Tamara, NY Submitted on Friday, May 14, 2010

This story brought tears to my eyes. it reminds me of my nephew who I helped raise. he went to prison for stealing. he got out and was on probation. and now he's back in there for drugs. and he also took all the blame. he is just turned 23.and he spent his birthday in prison. We don't even know how long my nephew is in there for this time. Thank you so much.

Alabama Submitted on Wednesday, June 09, 2010

This story brought tears to my eyes as well. Somebody that I loved with all my heart and soul went to prison for a crime he never did. But that's how he learned to become a bad person and it breaks my heart and soul that he grow up and went on to doing more serious crimes and more time in jail. I pray to God everyday that the law changes and may this shall not happen to another nice person. My prayers are with you.

Becky, New York Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

I love this poem. It sent tears down my cheek-repeatedly! My situation is regarding my daughter and her boyfriend. He is 21 yrs old and she is 23. They broke up and had a fight and he attempted to shoot her. The gun jammed and he did not have the opportunity to make me a "mother who had lost a child!" He was sentenced to 28 years in the correctional facility. He did not have an active father and I feel things would of been different in his life which would of never allowed this to happen. I pray for him daily because it is a hard lesson to learn. Your son is blessed to have a father like you. God Bless your family.

Rosalie, Colorado Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

This is just touching and very moving, coming from his father. I pray for his father and young boy, God will look after you young boy, pray every night before you go to sleep, and god will give his father a bouquet he really needed at this time. please keep loving him and don't quit on him. You just touched me so much.

Tia Maria, Bingham Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

I can relate to this poem. My son was in a camp at the age of 16-17. He was released months later and was home for only 1 week and was at a party when he committed a crime and was sent 2 jail at 17 and is now doing 20 years in prison. I will make a copy of this poem and send it to my son. I'm still praying that this appeal will go through and he will be home in 6-7 years. I rate this poem #1 in my books!

Joanna Warren, Yuba City CA Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

Do not ever give up....no matter what--- it is all we can give our children...I know I have been there. Hang in there and trust your heart and not advice...

Charlotte Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

Ken, a great poem showing unconditional love for your son and making him believe he can turn over a new leaf. far too often society, and families give up on those who go to prison. Great job.

Ronnie Doe, Charlestown Mass. Submitted on Tuesday, August 03, 2010

This poem touched my heart. I can relate to it as my son did not go to prison, but was innocently killed and sometimes we, as parents, just wished that our children could have made different choices

Tracey, South Africa Submitted on Wednesday, August 04, 2010

Wow this poem remains me of my oldest son. This is my life with him. Thank you I will send this Poem to him. I also cry because I felt all that pain and didn't know how to explain it. This poem explains it all.

Carmen Brito Submitted on Wednesday, August 04, 2010

I like this poem a lot because it reminds me of what my cousin is going through first his brother is killed and now his oldest brother is in trouble again heading back to jail. My mom brought them up and you'd think they would have learned and remembered all the love and care she gave them and the trouble she went through just to keep them safe.:(

Veronica B., NJ Submitted on Thursday, August 05, 2010

I am a nurse who works in a prison. When people come back for the 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th time, it's like old home week. I agree that something has to be done BEFORE kids reach this point, but let's think of the crimes that brought them to jail in the first place. OK, let's say a drug addict, did that drug addict push down an elderly couple to steal their meds, break into an elderly couple's apartment to steal items to sell for drugs, shoot someone? Many of these kids had no guidance (some did), & they are like feral people, who do not know how to act. Lets make prison's so that they can help a person learn job skills, rehab etc. I think every person who wrote what a good kid etc., need to rethink all the times that that particular kid blew up at you or someone you love.

Maureen Swank Submitted on Friday, August 06, 2010

I was so touched my your story I am glad to see a man standing in for his son. My son has never been in prison but my husband is for a crime he didn't commit. I will be there for him until the end of this.

Richmond VA Submitted on Friday, August 06, 2010

This hit home to many times, My son is 30, but makes choices like he is 18, not any thanks to his dad, who got him started on drugs and alcohol. When he was 6 years old. Smoking pot was his dads thing, until he got older then cocaine, acid and later METH. My son shot it up. To think he at one time wanted to be a brain surgeon. Now he is sitting in treatment for the 4th time after prison for 5 months. Hope he makes the right choice this time. I am his only friend and support , his mom. God love him and help him. I don't want to visit him at the cemetery. Thank you for this poem it was awesome!!!

Monique, WY Submitted on Sunday, August 29, 2010

A really touching poem shows the compassion a father has for his seed we need more real men who can express themselves like this.

Spinghope NC Submitted on Monday, August 30, 2010

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