Abandonment Poem

This poems tries to tell how much one person can hurt another.


© Bentli
why can't she see,
These laughs and smiles are fake
& when uncovered,
The shattered pieces of my soul spill to the red tainted floor below.

Why doesn't she bother to notice,
These tears are more then just sadness,
& that I only want to be loved
Not thrown away


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Published: Apr 2008

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