Confused about Love Poem

I wrote this poem for the man I love. We both had been through so much together. I want him to know that I am by his side no matter the situation.

My Babe

© Crystal
Together we may struggle
but without you all I feel is pain.
Sometimes I may seem confused
but there is one thing that will never change.

The feelings I have for you don't fade or go away.
They continue to grow stronger each day with every kiss.
Life without you is something I can't imagine.
From within my soul, it's you I'd miss.

I understand this world more then you may know.
I could believe in fate and put up a fight.
But you and I are not written.
Although there is a truth I'd like to write.

We both have scars,
with memories that can not be erased,
but together we are stronger.
In your hands my heart has been placed.

This is a choice I have made.
I understand the risk I take.
Please hold my heart dear to you.
Careful to never break.

If you do stumble or fall,
please don't forget to gather all the pieces.
It's your choice of what to do with them.
My love for you never ceases.

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Published: Sep 2011

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  • I too felt this undying love for the a man. Only he was a boy and I was a girl. I thought my world would end without him, I accepted everything, anything he was willing to give. It was not always love I got, either, at times, more times, it was unbearable heartache. We were so young, so raw. We married in our teens, gave it our best shot (I truly believed we had everlasting love and he did too) but as the years went by it seemed our love did too. It got ugly and painful, I had to end it for me, for my life, it was one of the hardest things I ever had to do. It took a long long time to be "civil" to each other but eventually we learned that what had brought us together had always been there, we liked each other, for the sake of our children, we learned to like one, respect one another. When he died a little of me did too, I realized under different circumstances, without all the baggage that had been brought into the relationship, we probably would have lasted much longer. A lesson learned, bittersweet though it was.

    Grace, San Francisco CA Submitted 11/1/2012
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  • I too felt this undying love for a man. Only he was a boy and I was a girl. I thought my world would end without him, I accepted everything, anything he was willing to give. It was not always love I got, either, at times, more times, it was unbearable heartache. We were so young, so raw. We married in our teens, gave it our best shot (I truly believed we had everlasting love and he did too) but as the years went by it seemed our love did too. It got ugly and painful, I had to end it for me, for my life, it was one of the hardest things I ever had to do. It took a long long time to be "civil" to each other but eventually we learned that what had brought us together had always been there, we liked each other, for the sake of our children, we learned to like and respect one another. When he died a little of me did too, I realized under different circumstances, without all the baggage that had been brought into the relationship, we probably would have lasted much longer. A lesson learned, bittersweet though it was.

    Grace, San Francisco Ca. Submitted 11/1/2012
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  • He says he loves me he blows me kisses he gives me hugs and it makes me blush but everyday I hear rumors gossip and everything that he likes the girl he broke up with. That they look into each others eyes but that never happens to me. He dose not show he loves me instead he just tells me. I do not know if I can trust him but when I wanna break up with him it's to hard because I do not want to loose him. I really do love him but it's just to hard to loose him.

    Jovan Torres Submitted 11/10/2012
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  • Yes it has very much. I loved a man smile but someone how his actions spoke louder then words he said he loved me but somehow it was all a front but the poem touched me because we had the best relationship and been together for 4 years but somehow a assumption came into the picture and everything changed.

    Princess Brown Submitted 3/14/2013
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