Brother Poem

Brother to Brother, He tells it like it is as his big brother goes off to basic training.

Big Brother

© Terri L. Brewer
You've always been here for me,
But now you are about to leave.
I know we fuss and fight,
But I love you with all my might.

You are my big brother,
And there is no other.
No one can take your place,
And when you leave, there will be this big empty space.

We've never been really close,
But at least you have not always lived across the coast.
Because some big brothers do,
I'm really grateful for the 15 years I've lived with you.

I remember when I was small,
And I would always fall.
You were always there for me,
And I know you always will be.

You told me not to cry,
That it would be ok.
Even if I thought you lied,
It was like my big brother saved the day.

You’ve made me laugh, you’ve made me cry,
You've even helped me hide some lies.
I love you is something I don’t tell you enough,
But I want you to know
When you leave it will be really tough.

I don’t know how my life will be,
Without you here beside me.
You've lived with me for 15 years,
But now we're shedding our good-bye tears.

I know you have to move out,
And start a life of your own.
But promise me without a doubt,
You will never forget us back home.

Dedicated to my big brother Danny Brewer Jr. recently sent off for basic training for the army.

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Published: Feb 2006

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  • My big brother Dean left for basic too. He went for Marines, but the pain is the same.

    Sam Submitted Dec 2008
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  • My brother is leaving for basic training too wow my eye's watered reading this beautiful poem :) God bless you and your brother.

    Linda Submitted May 2009
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  • I'm the oldest son in my family and that brought tears to my eyes just thinking of how much my little bro's do love me. great job

    Asad, New York Submitted Dec 2009
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  • My big brother left on August 3rd for basic training for the Air Force, and this poem is exactly what we did when we were kids, like getting hurt, and he came and helped me up and cleaned my cuts and stuff like that, he was my own little doctor, and every time he came to save me, he saved the day as well.

    Sierra, Virginia Submitted Aug 2010
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  • I'm the youngest in my family, my sister moved out last year and my brother, who I've been closest to my whole life, is going to be leaving for basic training in January. This makes me cry when I read this and think of him leaving. I don't know how my life will be without him here beside me. :/

    Tia, South Dakota Submitted Oct 2010
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  • My brother died in the army last year, and I never told him that I loved him. I will regret that for the rest of my life. This poem made me sob.

    Bri Submitted Feb 2011
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  • wow I love this poem, my brother is also in training in San Diego... even though he is in the marines I think everyone can relate to this poem... my brother is everything to me and when he left omg is was painful... I'm just waiting for the day he comes back... to everyone that has a family member serving our country I salute them and I thank them... so thanks to them... much respect yessenia mendoza

    Yessenia, Las Vegas Submitted Mar 2011
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  • My brother left to he joined the marines and I miss him like crazy but I try not to cry but it seems like I do all the time

    Brooke, Atlanta Submitted May 2011
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  • I'm only 13 and my big brother who is 18 leaves in 3 days for Army Basic Training for 4 months. This poem made my eyes tear up. I've cried so much because I don't want him to leave. He is like my bestfriend. I pray to God everyday that he will never get hurt. I love you Adam <3

    Allie, Georgia Submitted Aug 2011
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  • My brother is 18 he left for navy basic training and this was exactly our lives together It brought tears to my eyes I'm gonna send this to him just to let him know I love him with all my heart

    Jessica, Gallatin Tn Submitted Feb 2012
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  • My brother is in Afghanistan ;( I cry every time I think about him. He's in the army I can't know a lot of stuff because it's all top secret. But I just wanna no if he's ok!

    Denver, Colorado Submitted Apr 2012
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  • This is just the same .........missing my bro. He has gone for Air force training. I never care him much when he was with me, but after his absence from home missing him badly .....just love him..... :) MISSING U BHAIA (Prabhat)

    Prashant Pandey, Allahabad Submitted 7/4/2012
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  • My brother left September 3rd to the Marines. Thank you for this poem this is exactly how I feel and I miss his so much. I love my brother so much.

    Andre, California Submitted 9/4/2012
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  • This really made me tear up. My brother left a couple weeks ago to Texas, because he got into drugs. I do not know when he will be back, but it was really tough to see him go. Thank you for this poem, it really helped (:

    Rae, California Submitted 9/4/2012
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  • My big brother is leaving in three weeks to the army and I've been crying my eyes out. He has been there for me through thick & thin and I have no idea what to do with my self

    Zoie, Flordia Submitted 9/8/2012
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  • I am leaving soon for basic training to go to the army. Nice story my brothers always argue with me cause I'm their sister so I'm going to fight for my country woot woot I'm army strong

    Teia Baxter Submitted 9/13/2012
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  • WOW! I love this poem! My brother Dave is officially in the air force and he's now returning for six months. Its also "funny" because I am 15 too.

    Eric Lucas, New York Submitted 12/18/2012
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