Uncle Death Poem

He was my step dads uncle but me and him were very close. He helped me get into sports and he always put a smile on my face. He had died and it was one of the most hardest times of my life so this is what I did to help me deal with my pain.

Ralphy

© Destiny Ortiz
You were in the hospital for weeks.
When the news spread it hurt us down deep.
All the families from everywhere
All came to stop and stare
At what is now to be our beloved
The angel that was sent from up above
He had a wife and 3 kids
To give up they forbid
He also had a sickness that would not fail
The sad part is he didn't live to tell the tale
Some days he wasn't comprehending
But today I am wondering if the world is ending
Because all my loved ones are being taken
All the good people if I'm not mistaken
Well he had to spread his wings to fly away
Well I guess its good-bye for now, till another day

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Published: Apr 2011

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