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I wrote this poem for a special crush. Someone I have never met who is suffering from a joint disorder and is in immense pain. I want to show her that I want to feel the way she does and I have a distant connection with her through the stars. If she feels like she can't catch that falling star then I will catch the moment for her and one day when we are together I will express to her what it was like to feel for her at the time.

Our One Star

© Colby Barker
Look at the stars tonight
As we see the same light
And in that moment
It will be alright
If you miss a falling star
I'll catch it for you
Keep it in my heart
And we can share it too

Keep holding on
As life goes along
Pain is short-lived
As you are so strong
I will hold your hand
And look in your eyes
But it is only then
That our star will shine.


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Published: Apr 2009

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  • That is beautiful... Hope she's a lot better now.. Was in her position at one time.. With a man I was in love with who was far away.. So your poem really did get to me..

    Black Rose, Kenya Submitted Nov 2009
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  • I used this poem to tell my man I miss him. He's a marine stationed in Japan and I'm here in the states. Soon, it will be even harder because I am joining the military too. It's something very new for both of us but this poem was great to help me express that its going to be fine.

    Megan, MD Submitted Apr 2010
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  • This really hit the spot for me... I'm in love with a guy who lives in Cali where as I'm in Texas. One night we had a conversation about the stars. Since then I've only thought of him when I looked up at the stars.

    Brianna, Tx Submitted Mar 2011
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