Breaking Up Poem

realizing a relationship is over

Alone

© Aaron Williams
You look at me and see nothing
I look at you and see despair
We've been lying for so long we believe ourselves
Storming inside is deep hatred and pain
Externally blank
Our love has grown apart
Only thinking of ourselves
Which is why we shouldn't stay
So when were gone, and together apart
You leave me alone
In peace


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Published: May 2008

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