Broken Friendship Poem

Hi I'm Candice Jones and I have NEVER written a poem before. I guess this poem is about what I'm going though at the moment. All of my "friends" are stabbing me in the back and I just had to let my feelings out.

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I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my...

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Say Goodbye

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Published by Family Friend Poems July 2011 with permission of the Author.

You say you are my friend,
But you stab me in the back.
I sit here in my blood,
Wondering if you will ever come back.

And as I suffer,
The days go by.
I'm wondering what is this.
Why do I feel so dry?

We once used to be happy,
But now it's all disappeared.
This feeling of pressure
Is slowly getting near.

My suffering increases
As the days go by,
And I'm sitting here wondering
Why you said goodbye.

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  • Madeline by Madeline
  • 4 years ago

I also had a best friend who did something similar. I dated this guy, and I really, really loved him. Things went on pretty good until I got kinda bored and cheated on him. I was stupid. He wanted to "go back to the way things were." I mean, I couldn’t blame him, but then things took a CRAZY turn. He started dating my BEST FRIEND!! I was furious, but I didn’t show it. I was so heartbroken and sad, but I guess I got what I deserved. I hope they’re happy.

  • HUy Gia Han Vu by HUy Gia Han Vu
  • 4 years ago

I used to have friends whom I thought could treat me well. Unfortunately, they betrayed my belief in them. Even now, I still think that it is a mistake to have anything to do with such people.

  • Cece by Cece
  • 4 years ago

I actually had two best friends. We have been besties since 1st grade. Right now we're in 7th grade, and I'm no longer part of the crew. Last year we were separated and put into different classes. Both of them were in the same class and I was in another class. In their class they met another girl and kicked me out. We were best of friends, but now it's like I don't exist anymore. I try my best to distance myself because when I hang out with them I feel like a stranger.

  • Desiree by Desiree
  • 5 years ago

Hi, my name is Desiree. I'm in 8th grade and my ex-bestie is in 5th grade. There was this guy I was dating. My beastie had a phone and I didn't at that time, so she eventually took his number without my knowledge, so they started chatting. Then she was like, "You and my friend are not fit for each other." Then they started dating.

  • Alina Tayeng by Alina Tayeng
  • 9 years ago

I once had 2 best friends...Meyu and Aisu. One day, when I came to school, Kipi (my classmate) told me that Aisu was crying. Then I talked to her and made her smile and after that she had a fight with Meyu and then Aisu said that nobody was her best friend... she called us her best friend just for name-sake.... those words still make me sad..... I never became happy for real after that day

  • Aryanna Chlumsky by Aryanna Chlumsky
  • 5 years ago

I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my eighth year I found out that she had been dating him behind my back while I was dating him. He was cheating on me the whole time. I gave him an ultimatum one day, and he walked off, so I knew who he really wanted. The next day I found them holding hands in the yard that we had recess in, and I had a breakdown.

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