Confused about Love Poem

Scared To Fall In Love Poem

I'm 18 years old. Go to a JC, and just enjoy writing poetry. Most are about love and most are sent to my girlfriend. She has been a swimmer her whole life, which is why there are numerous references to the sea and mermaids. hope you enjoy and please give me some feedback. I'd really appreciate it

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© Steve Escalera
Free fall down into the unknown
give you my heart and relinquish my soul
it's best for what life shall bestow
so I take a big step in the unknown

Never look back, for this is the choice
don't question myself, and keep my mind poised
take a look up, thank god and rejoice
because the truth is, I know I made the right choice

So I follow the path and forget the past
this devotion and emotion, I'll make sure it lasts
with passion so wide and a love so vast
pain and sadness will be things of the past

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Published: Feb 2013

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