Mother Daughter Poem

No one can truly understand depression unless you either live with it or love someone who lives with it. This poem is dedicated to my beautiful daughter who has been suffering from depression for so long I don't remember when she wasn't depressed. All I can do is try and love her through her pain....

The Ruse

She’s beauty, style, poise and grace,
At least she appears to be.
But no one knows the girl who hides
Behind the face they see.

Her self-esteem is all but gone,
Of her ego there’s barely a trace.
There’s so much pain behind the mask
She wears upon her face.

Depression has controlled her life
With far too many tears,
Her smile is fake; she’s good at it,
She’s been doing it for years.

The cover is what attracts us,
To the story within the book.
And she’s afraid that without the ruse,
No one would bother to look.

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Published: Jul 2008

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  • I live with depression and know how it is to feel no one understands, this touched me to feel you support your daughter. god bless

    donna Submitted Aug 2008
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  • I really like this poem. It touched me in the fact that this is the way I am and have been for three years. I want to thank you for writing a poem like this. I have no family all I have is my Boyfriend. So thank you for writing a great poem like this.

    Mandy Submitted Sep 2008
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  • wowwww.... That was amazing. I've been suffering from depression for many years and understand the exact feelings of your poem. very nice of you to support your daughter.
    take care and hope that she will fight it and not live with it all her life.

    lara Submitted Oct 2008
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  • I have a friend that's exactly like this..I don't know what to do cause she is so depressed and so scared to show her true self that she is bottled up so much that she is exploding on me because she cant take it anymore...really great poem

    emily Submitted Jan 2009
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  • I really can feel what she is going through, I am 34 yrs old and have been paralyzed for more than half. It's like you have a different face, personality when your among others, you tell them what they want and expect to hear. It's easy for you, you have been doing it for years. I have. I've been bottling up things for years and it's taking it's toll. It's funny how I can describe what I am feeling to strangers other than to my family and friends. Anyway it's a great poem.

    Tanya Magooshboy Submitted Jun 2009
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  • Thank you so very much for sharing. I feel your daughters pain. This has touched my heart in many ways. I feel as though you can see right through me and feel as this was written for me. Thank you very much!

    Jessica, Oxford,Ma Submitted 9/17/2012
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  • Thank you for sharing both the love & sadness that you & your truly amazing daughter struggle with on a constant basis. I am a mother with hidden depression & am now confronted with my daughters depression, I applaud you with your open amazing nature. I've always been ashamed, I now feel I may have made it worse for my beautiful girl by my shame. May your days become joyful & may your little girl live with happiness thanks xo

    Mel Submitted 4/7/2013
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