Sports Poem

When I Dance

© Kacie Hiatt
When I Dance
It is like I am in
A Dream.
My feet lead my heart
And I am on a cloud.
A cloud of Dreams

The music sways me
My feet lead me
I am in a trance
Everything
All my worries
Disappear

On my cloud of
Dreams
I am not a person
But an inanimate
Object
I am special
I am beautiful

When the song
Is over
I cry
I cry like
A child who has
Lost her toy
The dance
The song
Is over

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Votes: 43

Rating: 3.58

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Published: Apr 2008

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  • I love this poem. It is how almost every dancer should feel when they go out on the floor and dance. I for one agree with this poem and rate it "Loved It". Thank you for writing this inspirational poem about dancing!

    Christy Submitted Mar 2009
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