Abandonment Poem

A young girl wonders if a person in her life who has abandoned the family still loves them.


© Paige L. Barense
I was looking at the moon
Wondering if you were too,
I was looking at the stars,
Wondering if you were too,
I was looking at some pictures,
Wondering if you missed me,
I was looking in the mirror,
Wondering if you would come back,
I was wondering if you would choose her over me,
I was wondering if you knew who I was,
I was wondering if I knew who you still are,
I was wondering if you knew you betrayed us,
I love you but now I am wondering if I still do?


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Published: Feb 2006

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