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Poem Asking Permission To Love You

This is a poem to my beautiful girlfriend, Summer. From the beginning, I asked Summer if we could build a relationship the old fashioned way. This poem is my way of asking her permission to love her...

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Would It Be Ok?

© Ryan Stiltz

Published on February 10, 2016

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part
Of being your man and showed you a view,
One that only a real man could do?
Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?
Would it be ok if I kissed your face?
Would it be ok if I were to replace
All the men in your past that just wouldn't do
And vow to be faithful and always be true?
Would it be alright to look in your eyes?
Would it be alright to never tell lies?
Would it be alright to find a way?
Would it be alright to long for the day
To pull you close and whisper in your ear
And tell you our feelings are nothing to fear?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
To tell you there's nothing I'd rather do
Than spend my whole life loving only you...

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  • by Mariam Lisa Del Valle
  • 2 months ago

My boyfriend is the sweetest man. He shows me his love in any way he can. I am so in love with him, and I will always love him. Until death do us part. I love you, handsome... always!

  • by Nikki Sherman
  • 4 months ago

My boyfriend sent this to me recently, and I just absolutely feel in love with not only the poem but also with him all over again. This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read.

  • by Theuns Victor
  • 10 months ago

A poem I can truly relate to. The poet touched a single spot in my heart. After having going through a second divorce in 3 years the fear of getting hurt again lies just below the surface. How do you tell a woman that you have feelings for her, that you have fallen for her without scaring her. The poet makes it easy by asking the questions and letting the girl answer. Truly a touching poem with far reaching effects for a new long term relationship.

Thank you for making it available.

  • by Alex Reynozo
  • 5 months ago

This is the best poem I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this great poem.

  • by Mar Small
  • 11 months ago

It was awesome how you put it. The format was great.

  • by Swati
  • 11 months ago

Ryan I hope you and your girlfriend live hundreds of years. Most beautiful and loving poem I read till date... god bless you both..

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