Sympathy Poem

This is dedicated to My Best Friend/ God Brother who's 18 year old brother was killed. It hurt me deeply when they broke the news and the worst part... My Best friend saw his big brother die.

You Broke Apart

The one who just showed anger
No fear, No hurt
The one who never seemed to care
Broke;
Tears shed and not a word spoke
Now I see that you were being strong
Trying to hold it together
Not just for you
but for the people around you.
When I saw one tear fall
I know right away
something was wrong
And I knew it was serious.
What is there for me to do?
What is there for me to say?
I feel helpless because the loss of a brother
I have never been through.
I can't say I know your pain because that I do not.
I can't say I know what you're going through
because that would be a lie.
But something I can say is
I'm here for you and I love you
Always and forever.
Your brother although he is gone from the Earth
He is always in our hearts.

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Published: Oct 2010

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