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Feelings Poem

I wrote this poem because it describes what I am feeling. It's about what I see when I look in the mirror and how I've changed so much over the past years that I hardly recognize myself anymore. It is also about how it makes me sad thinking about who I have become comparing to who I used to be.

A Lost Little Girl

© Steph
She looks in the mirror
And see's someone staring straight back at her
A lost little girl
With cold hard eyes
And no expression on her face
Trying to cover up the pain she feels
A lost little girl
With too much anger inside of her too control
So she takes it out on everyone around her
Because she can't stop herself
A tear falls from her eye
Realizing that this lost little girl
Who is staring back at her
Is in fact herself
Her reflection
So wiping her tears away
She steps closer to the mirror
Looks herself in the eyes
And whispers to herself
"Who have I become?"

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Published: 12/27/2008

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omg...I feel this exact way..n your poem really touched me because as a matter of fact this is how I feel right at this moment

viviana Submitted on Wednesday, February 11, 2009

God. I feel like that all the time. I always just look in the mirror, and wonder who I am becoming. And... the pain I feel sometimes. It's like I have put a wall of ice around myself. And anyone who asks what's wrong I snap at. I understand how you feel. I really really do.

Emilie, Canada Submitted on Tuesday, December 22, 2009

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