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I wrote this when my best friend and her boyfriend where having problems.

With You

©  Liz Loudermilk
Just turn away,
We have nothing more to say.
The hardest part of this is leaving you,
Because we have nothing better to do.
The light went out and,
We watched our memories on the screen.
It seems like it was just a scene.
I gave my heart to you,
But now its under your feet.
Let's go back to that place,
Where we fell in love.
In that old house,
Under the dark stairs.
We really never had any cares.
I know I can't make you stay,
But I don't want to go my separate way.
Remember as we sat on that bank,
And joked about setting the town on fire.
We jumped in your car.
I was with you all those years,
We never had any fears.
So remember all those times,
When we were inseparable,
Our love was unbelievable.
All we had was trust.
I'll never forget our love.
With You by Liz Loudermilk @FamilyFriendPoems

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Published: 7/17/2009

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This poem really touched me because this is the way I felt when I had to let go of someone and if hurt me a lot. But sometimes it's better to be without this or that person because its harder when your with someone that doesn't love you anymore!!

lupe torres Posted on Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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