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I'm in 9th grade, and currently in highschool. I like to read book as hobbies, and English is one of my favorite classes There really is no reason why I just said "O, I'm going to write this poem", and I don't consider myself a true poet, yet I consider this, a "true" poem. The truth is that I rarely even consider writing a poem, and this poem right here, was something that happened as a spur of the moment, and I'm glad for it.

True Love

©  Charles Orta
Your love be blazing fireworks overhead
A brilliant fireball lighting up my heart
Or is it ashes waiting to be spread,
Ready for the wind, to give it depart?

Your eyes glisten like the moon at twilight
And often are they both full of much wit.
Your beauty radiates all your highlight,
But is love love, when you give, but don't get?

You say one thing, yet action betrays thought.
Can what we feel really be going broad
Like the firefly which can never be caught,
Or is all your love, just another fraud?

Yet the truth can bring no change to my mind,
When I fear, that I am already blind.
True Love by Charles Orta @FamilyFriendPoems

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Published: 4/29/2009

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I just want to make a wish that I get to go out with a very hot boy before September. Please everyone who sees this pray for me so I will ..Please..
Thank you and by the way I love ….

Zoey Posted on Friday, July 03, 2009

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