Goodbye Love Poem

Hang In There Girls, It May Get Better

This was written at what I thought was the end of my relationship. My guy has since pulled his head out of his ***. We still have some extremely difficult moments, but who doesn't when all of life's a learning experience? Hang in there girls...it may get better!

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I just wanted to say this is beautiful...and it's exactly how I feel as I'm losing my wife...

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Published: April 2009

The poor thing...it howls
audible pain.
It thrashes around,
trying to regain its feet,
but it is broken -
a shadow of what it once was,
unrecognizable.
Painting all around it red with
its own impending doom.
I don't know how it still lives.
Tears burn my eyes as I realize
I will have to end its misery
because it howls too loud
and tries too hard
and hurts too much
as it dies in my chest
with every thought of you.
Goodbye.

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  • Jon by Jon, Colorado
  • 9 years ago

I just wanted to say this is beautiful...and it's exactly how I feel as I'm losing my wife...

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