Break Up Poem

I Feel Like Dying

My Name is Rochelle Ferrell & I'm 14 years Old; I write My Poems To help Me & I lost Someone Close To Me & I Feel Like Dying ...

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I can relate. I dated this guy for three months, and recently he decided to break up with me. We are both just starting college, so he said he wanted to have a free college experience, which...

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Dear Love

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Published: August 2012

See There Was A Tear Rolling Down My Face As I Began To Write This
So I Closed My Eyelids & Let It Fall
Because If Love Is Blind Then This Feelings Sightless
And Me .. I Feel Nightless Dayless Restless Because Of This Hatred
& I Don't Mean Emotionally
I Mean What I feel When You're Not Close To Me
Because Today We're Barely Even Speaking
& It Feels Like Just Yesterday
You Were Lying Restlessly In My Arms
Like .. You Had Something To loose If You Moved
& Today I'm Here Alone Hating It
& Your Voice Like Air Whispering Between The Cracks
"I Love You "
"I Love You Back "
But Everything Seemed To Fall Just Like That
I Cried Twice
You Held My Like Grudges
So long & Hard
I felt So Much Love Cutting Beneath my Skin
It Was Enough to Leave Me Permanently Scarred
You Are The Love I Never Been Able To Personify , But Only Touch Feel & See From A Distance
You Are The Time ; The Seconds The Minutes The Hours Within Me
& I Never Felt This Way Before
So Broken So Empty ; So Whole , Then So Half Of A Person ..
So While You Were Sleeping Last night I Wrote a Letter To This Love
& It Went
Dear Love, You Brought Me Something No one Could Ever Bring Me ; You Brought Me Lust, Hope, & Faith ; But At The Same Time You Manage To Leave Me Empty , Ever Since She Walked Away She Took My Sun With Her And The Very Next Day My Clouds Are Grey . My insides Are as Blue As A Warm Day ; Yet So Sad & Filled With Gloom & Love I Hate Personification ; But If You Could Feel This You'd Wanna Rip Your Insides Away From Your Feelings ; You'd Wanna Hold on To The Little Bit Of Strength You Have Holding You Together ; And Pray That your Not The Vail that Breaks , .. It Feels Like She Tore Open My Chest Ripped Out My Heart & Walked Away & This Depressing Moment Was Unknown .. So Please Love .. For Now On .. Just Leave Me Alone .

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  • by Laney, Indianapolis IN
  • 4 years ago

This poem really reminds me of me and my ex boyfriend. It's been really tough getting over him, and I thought over the summer I would get over him, but it just makes me want him even more. I really wish that we could get back together, but he just wants to be friends. I don't know if I can be friends with him, because it's so hard to be friends with someone you're madly in love with. I think about ending it, just ending it all and going away, but I want to believe he still cares about me. I don't know, I just want to go away, away to my LaLa Land.

  • by Eneyda Nunez-Valencia
  • 1 year ago

I can relate. I dated this guy for three months, and recently he decided to break up with me. We are both just starting college, so he said he wanted to have a free college experience, which meant that he wanted to enjoy being single. There were many things that he could do with me being his girlfriend. He also recently joined a fraternity, which means that he has free access to girls, alcohol and parties. The reason why it is so hard for me to let go it is because he is so nice and caring when it comes to me. I try to meet new people so I will be able to stop thinking about him, but I always go back to him. He just needs to grow up.

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