Teen Moving On Love Poem

My heart was broken a year ago by my dream guy and I was devastated. I started cutting and I wouldn't talk to anybody. Then while I was sitting on my front porch reading a boy walked up to me and said that he just moved in across the street. He was sweet and so gorgeous. We started going out and still are till this day. This is a poem for anyone going through the same thing. Don't worry. There is always someone out there for you.

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I love this, I can relate a lot to it. I had a breakup that was truly upsetting me and I wanted to commit suicide but his best friend was the one who made feel better and was the pick me up.

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Published: February 2011

Cut my wrist and hope to die
Your the one who made me cry.
You left me alone in the rain
Soaking wet in my own pain.

You threw me away you left me behind
How could I have been so blind?
There was no love our love wasn't true
I hate myself for loving you.

The stitches are helping but my heart is still sore
I'll never love anymore.
But when he walks up and he says hi
could this be the one true guy?

We fall in love and the rain goes away
I'll never see it another day.
We share a kiss, we are forever
We will always be together.

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  • Kristina by Kristina, Panama City Fl
  • 7 years ago

I love this, I can relate a lot to it. I had a breakup that was truly upsetting me and I wanted to commit suicide but his best friend was the one who made feel better and was the pick me up.

  • Gracen by Gracen, Williamston SC
  • 8 years ago

I had the perfect life, perfect grades, perfect parents, and the perfect boyfriend. Nothing stood in my way when I wanted something. but all this changed when I fell in love again. But this time not with a boy, with a girl named Tammy. Now everyone hates me and my mom thinks I'm a freak. But I stood up for what I was. We were perfect just the way we were. Until she had a car accident. She died. leaving me here in this world alone to face my problems alone. That changed my life forever. You know what I say, FUCK Love! It's no good for you.

  • Crystal by Crystal
  • 8 years ago

I can really relate to this poem because I was really in love with this guy and he cheated on me and the pain was unbearable, I felt like I could not breath, I felt empty inside. but then my friend made everything better, and we got together, and he took the pain away. Although, it didn't work out he still is someone special to me because he helped me love myself.

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