The One
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Very good usage of words. Rhyming pattern is good and the structure rocks. One of the best I've read so far. Keep on writing more!
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Mom, you are the centerpiece of my life.
The light in my sun.
I can't thank you enough for all you have done.
You make me smile when I am sad.
Mommy, I love you. You are the syrup to my waffles, the sunshine to the night. You are always by my side!
Mommy,
I cannot say how much I love you
Because I cannot talk!
Although, I can write poems in an Iambic style
Such a beautiful poem, I can relate my mom was so dear to me now she has stepped through Heaven's gate. Through all the stress and all the strife, she still lived a good life, she raised us...
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If I took a little minute to write a poem for you,
It would turn into a lifetime for all the things you do....
So I'll try and keep it simple.
There's some things I wish to say,
Thanks for making this wonderful poem. It really touched me in many ways just thinking of the look on my moms face after hearing this. We never really had a relationship, but I think this...
I'm writing you to tell you that I love you
Something I hardly ever do.
I never tell you enough how much I love you
and it's something I must do.
This poem was the best ever. Describes my mom all the way.
How can I thank you for your support,
For the guidance, prayers, and help of all sorts?
So much you have done that I could never repay.
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These are the words I've constructed in my mind,
to say thank you for all that you've done.
But words are somehow hard to find.
Before I could say it, they're long gone.
She picks me up from a fall.
She yells at me when I color on the wall.
She tells me about God and encourages me to pray.
She holds me close and tells me everything's okay.
I love her so much, my mother.
She's always in my heart.
Even though we argue,
we'll never be apart.
Mother - the loveliest word - gives bliss and peace not only to humans but also to wild life existing on this planet earth. This beautiful relationship starts even before the birth. The day...