I'm Dying On The Inside
Analysis of Form and Technique
You see a smile on the outside,
But that's all you can see.
What if tears run down my face on the inside?
Analysis of Form and Technique
You see a smile on the outside,
But that's all you can see.
What if tears run down my face on the inside?
This is my poem of the day because I feel the same way. My boyfriend and I were going through drama, and he think it's okay for him not to say how I feel about it, but it hurts me deep inside...
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Another 24 hours poured into the cement
Living through another's persons regrets..
Just one piece of a puzzle, too big to comprehend
Cant see the end, left the lights on again...
This sounds like it could be a song. I Love it! :)
inside I'm crying
outside I'm smiling
no one notices
but its hard for me to control this...
Exactly!! You know all of us go through difficult situation in our lives, but the important thing is knowing that at the end of the day you have someone to hold your hand!!
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she knew exactly what she wanted
and how she'd get it
not trying so hard
just to make it...
this poem explains everything about my life: the good little girl who never goes wrong but then I was sent to boarding school. and there everything changed. I couldn't trust anyone, I know...
I am a pet writing of its pain..
I am a teenager living a life of shame
I am your sister making a good impression
I am your daughter hiding her deep depression.....
That is me too. My best friend is never there for me, so I found a new one who is there for me and understands.
What do you call it when all you feel is pain?
When your loved ones look at you and all you feel is shame?
When you're tired of living and playing this game?
When you know your life is meaningless and you're the only one to blame?
Sadly, nowadays that's how a good bit of the world's population describes how they feel and the thoughts on their emotional state about their life in general. It's sad. It's NOT you it's...
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She wakes up in the morning
Hoping for a new day
In her mind everything's good
For now everything's going her way...
This poem was amazing. Great job! Keep up the good work! :)
Nothing.
everyday I wake up feeling like my world is upside down...
I'm closed up ready to burst.
Every freakish thought tingles inside me.
My feelings want to escape but they live in silence.
They can't find a way to morph into words,...
I sit here all alone in this dark scary place,
I want to run but it grabs me by the wrist,
its like my shadow and it holding my hand leading me where it wants to take me,
to its dark scary land, ...
My name is Grace and this poem had touched me deeply, because I have experienced the same thing that Leslie had gone through. I feel and carry too much pain ever since I was born. I was born...