I'm Dying On The Inside
Analysis of Form and Technique
You see a smile on the outside,
But that's all you can see.
What if tears run down my face on the inside?
Analysis of Form and Technique
You see a smile on the outside,
But that's all you can see.
What if tears run down my face on the inside?
This is my poem of the day because I feel the same way. My boyfriend and I were going through drama, and he think it's okay for him not to say how I feel about it, but it hurts me deep inside...
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She wakes up in the morning
Hoping for a new day
In her mind everything's good
For now everything's going her way...
This poem was amazing. Great job! Keep up the good work! :)
Darkness closes in around me
As I lay my head to sleep,
Thinking of the sadness that I weep.
Every tear shed is a fear forgotten.
I'm her, but I'm not. I am the one who walks in the halls with a smile and a giggle...but i'm not. The girl who was so sure of her future, the girl who would sneak the sun inside for a short...
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These are the hard times I'm going through,
These are the happenings of recent and new.
Abandonment from family young and old,
Pop dying and run away, brother's soul has been sold!...
This is an amazing poem and made me look at my life and want to make it change for the better! I cut and have recently started drinking and smoking and life just feels so worthless so I know...
Seems your to late to save me
I feel like I wanna cry
Seems like you love me
But you're too late I wanna die ...
I know what you mean, I was raped by four boys that went to my school at age 10.. It was hard having to see their faces every day for the next 2 years.. and my family has it's own problems,...
I'm daddy's little misunderstood
Always wearing my hood
With my headphones in
Never letting you win...
I feel the exact same way, my dad tells me the way to do things and I do it to show him I'm a good son but he never acknowledges anything I do, like he wants me to be a good son and I try but...
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Does anyone know the price I've paid?
The things running through my head never seem to end.
I want to get out,
My eyes are heavy,
My mind is sore.
I don't think
I can take this anymore.
The "other" girl
I may be sweet and kind,
But there is more to this girl.
I can laugh and smile,...
I know how this feels. I'm the only girl wrestler in my home town. People look at me different, family members try and convince me wrestling is a sin. Through all my life I have had to hide...
If I told you I was okay, would you believe me or even care?
Can you see the strong upheld girl who is always happy?
Or can you see the darkness and sadness that overtakes her?
When you look into her eyes can you see the pain or the horror?
I am a 13 year old girl currently. I, I guess you could calk me bipolar. I don't even understand myself. I would like to remain anonymous because I despise attention. I don't have a very good...