The Struggling Swallow
in Animal Poems
Under a dock over the sea
Nestled between a lake of debris,
The young swallow spreads out its coat
In desperation to stay afloat.
in Animal Poems
Under a dock over the sea
Nestled between a lake of debris,
The young swallow spreads out its coat
In desperation to stay afloat.
in Animal Poems
It was merely happenstance
As I walked about my home
To note the movement in the grass
Of a creature with a dome.
I see you standing there.
I feel your eyes on me.
I resume my tasks, but there you are.
in Meaningful Poems
I have experienced many things.
But, really, my life is quite ordinary.
I can talk, walk, dance and sing;
Dear Ann, Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. This is my first time responding to anyone, as I am rather new at this. I know my work is rather elementary, but I am having...
What will you remember
of the days we could not play?
When things were very different
from just the other day.
Another lovely poem by you. Keep writing - I am very much enjoying your work.
Best wishes, Ann.
Hello Peter, I loved your poem because I read your introduction' a suggestion you mentioned on the forums. The meaning behind it takes it to a higher level. It is very relatable. . Great job. Lucylove2022
Dear Ann, I love the story about you and your husband. I can definitely relate. It is a beautiful poem about two people complementing each other, even though they have different interests. I am so sorry for your loss. continue writing. I do believe writing can soothe the soul. From across the ocean I am wishing you the best. Susan.
Dear Ann, Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. This is my first time responding to anyone, as I am rather new at this. I know my work is rather elementary, but I am having fun with it. It gives me a warm feeling knowing that someone sees the humor or gets a chuckle out of these simple pieces. From across the ocean I wish you the best. With sincere thanks, Susan