Our Long Distance
please reassure me
that your love is still true,
that the distance between us
hasn't worn out our glue,
please reassure me
that your love is still true,
that the distance between us
hasn't worn out our glue,
He's tired of the pain.
He's tired of every lie.
He's tired of the countless nights
When all he does is cry.
This poem makes an important point. Often we think in a breakup there's only one hurt heart, but in reality, both people could be hurting. But that might mean they should not have ended it.
Do not judge me
From the outside,
Because all you will see
Is my stupid pride.
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The look in her eyes,
Depicts courage
Despite the uncertainty
In the once blue sky.
Days turn to night,
And Greenland turns
To desert.
I have seen kings fallen
And mighty...
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