How true! "One child cannot replace another child." My 38 year old son Corey passed away in 2013, on my birthday no less. I have 2 other sons and a daughter. God bless them and keep them safe. They are great kids, but there is a reason God took my Corey. He was not at peace on earth. I know he is at peace with God.
I cannot begin to express how each word of this poem resonates with me. I lost my baby sister; she was only 22, exactly 3 months ago, and every second of every day my heart is constantly breaking thinking of her - my best friend, my everything. This poem is beautiful.
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Have faith. In the end, that's all we all have.
Hi, my brother is about to be 18 and he really wants to go to the Navy instead of college. He is also always there for me when my parents work and takes good care of us. There are times when we hate each out because we are always picking on each other. But I really care about him because he's my older brother. I'm 11, about to be 12. And I really don't want him to leave, but that's way out of my control. I really look up to him since I don't have a sister to look up to. When he was 13 he would always play with my Barbie’s with me. He slowly grew, slowly spending less time with me and more with my baby brother, but I still love him. He gives me all his old clothes. Right now I'm wearing his old t shirt and shorts. I guess what I'm trying to say is I'm not ready for him to go.
Don't let them win. Ignore them, then you will be free from whatever haunts your nights.
I know how you feel. My best friends are like your friends. They don't think that I should cut, and when I tell them that I did they don't believe me until I show them. Take my advice, don't do it because it leaves scars, and you don't want your children to see them because then you will have to tell them what you did and then they will think that it's okay.
I have a boyfriend who cares for me and loves me no matter what. We have been together for three months now, and I love him for who he is. He's my world, my love, my hero, my savior, and he's my everything. I love him so much that I don't want to lose him. He means the world to me.
I love this poem. It's hilarious!
Hi, your poem is great! I hope that you will write more poems. I really loved it!
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