Heartbreak Poem

Just from the bottom of my heart...

Bottom Of My Heart

© Efi
Don't talk anymore my love
Just look at me
and you will understand
how I feel.
Look deep in my eyes
and you'll see your name,
my soul's broken mirror.
I love you more than you believe,
like you are my life,
my other half,
my subconscious guardian angel.
Look around you,
has anyone loved you more than I do?
Never cry my love
cause you'll make me bleed.
Always be happy
cause your smile is a source of life for me.
I breathe when you breathe.
But forgive me
for what I say.
I know you feel nothing.
For you I'm just a silly game
that you played with once
and now you hate
even to look at.
I'm sorry for my feelings
I know they drown you,
they don't set you free.
Come and tell me you hate me
that there's no other chance,
no fake hope.
Don't show me, but tell me.
And then I will leave
I swear I will leave you,
my endless pain.
It's not your fault,
I can't blame you
it's me who loves you.
Tell me your truth
and you'll never see your name in my eyes again,
cause I'll keep our past and my love
in the bottom of my heart
and I'll be gone...


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Published: Aug 2009

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  • I just wanted to say thank you for this poem. It is everything I want to say to my ex, who didn't even tell me that we were not together anymore, he just changed his relationship status on Facebook, and put up these pictures of himself and this other girl, saying that she was his world.
    Your poem has truly touched me, it's everything I feel.
    thank you

    Jade Submitted Mar 2010
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  • My girlfriend just broke up with me and this is nearly exactly how I feel. I don't think she really cared about me. I tried talking to her, but she just ignores me. I love her a lot.

    Antonio, WI Submitted May 2010
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  • My boyfriend and I just broke up, this poem explains a lot of my feelings. It feels like he has finally said good bye, but I'm still sitting here hoping he'll come back and make everything ok again.. I've texted him twice since the break up, and he hasn't said anything back. I'm only 18, and I know I'm not supposed to know what true love is, but I love this boy more than anyone can understand..

    Amanda, CA Submitted Sep 2011
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  • I don't know what is going on with my boyfriend but I think he wants to break up with me and he doesn't know how....not knowing what is going on with the one you love hurts and this poem gave me peace in some strange way

    Unami, Botswana, Africa Submitted Jun 2012
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  • I loved this poem. I think this is how I feel so empty inside. Maybe waiting for him. Thinking he'll come back. I am so empty. My heart breaks even when I see him, but I know I'll get over him.

    Osorio Submitted Oct 2012
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  • WOW!! This is exactly how I feel. The guy I love just fell in love with my best friend and I've been crying non-stop! This made me stop for the first time. Thank you.

    Eliza, Australia Submitted 7/23/2013
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