Hurting Poem

I wrote this poem because the one guy (my true love) hurt me in so many ways.

Lies

© Kendra
You broke my heart in two
And took me like a bet,
with all you put me through
I have so many regrets.

To lose you was worth it,
although I wasn't sure,
it seemed to make me happy,
but still so insecure.

We always said Forever
we would take it to the end
never give it up
but this time my heart couldn't mend.

It cut so deep into me
I guess it hurt you too
but when you did it, then you lied
I had to say "we're through."

I gave you all I had
I tried to make it last
but now all we have
are memories from the past.

So look me in the eye
and tell me what you see
a girl so broke inside
who's been through misery.

And now Im moving on
with the pain that kills inside
but Im starting to forget
by reminding myself, how you lied!

I have somebody new
someone to treat me right,
to talk to lovingly
and to hold me all night.

He's there for me when I need him
to give me love and support
to hold me close and wipe away
all my signs of hurt.

To kiss me softly every night
and let me know he's there
to call me just because,
just to tell me that he cares.

Now here I go again
fallen so hard, so deep
but this time it's different,
this is one I want to keep!

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Published: Jan 2008

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  • I love this poem because its so true about everything..
    I love how its being real about our lives now and in the future and also the past...

    Australia Melbourne Submitted Sep 2010
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  • I love this poem. Feel it so much because that's how we ended. I'm going to still find that new love and when I do, I will never look back. It's so funny a person who does you wrong can easily move on to the next. Tired of sitting around, I'm going to look for my new person because this one wasn't worth the tears.

    Cleveland, Oh Submitted Feb 2011
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  • You know I am 26 years old and I have been with this man since I was fifteen. We have four beautiful children but that's all we got good out of this relationship. I thought he loved me I swear I did!!! But everyday there's nothing but lies and tears falling so hard so unhappy when all I want is to be loved, honestly is that so much to ask for? He puts so many things before us things that just won't matter in the end. It makes no sense at all. So confused yet so broken down and so so tired. I have given him my all and I mean everything but it still aint enough to make him see that I am standing here loving him...and needing him in return. This poem has opened something inside me. Maybe I can find someone that will love me sometimes I wonder if that's even possible if there is anything out there such as true love may be there is, I think now it might be worth finding out :) What do I have to lose? Thanks Kendra

    Ashley, Blairsville GA Submitted Aug 2011
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  • I love - LIES - because it reminds me of a love I had that didn't appreciate me. I gave it my all and he killed me inside little by little. I found someone new and I feel like he's renewing me little by little.

    Elisa, Orem UT Submitted Oct 2011
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  • That poem really touch me, because it reminded me what I went through. It killed me inside, I cried everynight before I could sleep, I couldn't function at all. but one day one day I will find that special person.

    Frankisha Submitted Nov 2011
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  • This poem has touched me a lot, I have been used, cheated on, lied to, and have gotten dumped so many times I have lost count and I'm sick and tired of it I sometimes wish I were not here anymore cause it hurts to much. I know that bad things happen to good people but when it happens everyday that just not normal.

    Nolan, Kelowna B.C. Canada Submitted Dec 2011
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  • My Name is Moses I am 29 years old, I am Nigerian. I fall in love with the only Daughter of a Bishop her name is Vera, but the Relationship couldn't continue just because My mum is not a Christian, her daddy being a Bishop said she can't marry me just because of My Mum, I am a born again Christian that loves God so Much, but just because of my Mum I lost the woman I was supposed to called my life...IS so painful that the Woman I love is gone....

    Evwiekpamare Moses, Nigeria Submitted Feb 2012
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  • Hey! I-LOVE-THIS-POEM!!!! For what has been going on in my life it is really relatable and It's always nice to know that you're not alone. Here's to the broken hearted and the mending. KEEP WRITING!!! :) <3

    Sofie, Mighigan Submitted Apr 2012
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  • I love the poem its pretty much spot on. But what I really want to say is I applaud all of you who chose to stand up and move on, because its extremely hard. You only have one heart and when its broken its almost near impossible to fix leaving you with a shell...

    Anthony, California Submitted Jul 2012
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  • Well..... It started it was beautiful then he cheated... My heart is so broken it bleeds..... He was supposed to be my forever, but forever will not come. I will always love him just because of what he taught me.... Nothings forever. Love last. I have been lied too.......

    Va. 757 Submitted Aug 2012
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  • What an awesome Poem....my ex lied to me...so I can related to "lies"

    Penny, South Africa Submitted Oct 2012
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  • Me and my boyfriend have been going out since November 17, 2010 and he has hurt me for the last time. I don't know why he does it but he does. After reading this poem I actually realized he's not worth all the bull**** that he has put me through.

    Direese, Louisville KY Submitted Nov 2012
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  • I love this poem. I have had someone lie, and hurt me as well so I know how it feels to be hurt by someone you love and care about, but I found someone else that treats me good the way I want to be treated.

    Columbus, Ohio Submitted 4/24/2013
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  • I love this poem, I was in love for 4 years. This man I thought loved me cheated all the time but would come crying that he loved me. I don't know what this was. I tried to let him go because it was too much to handle , I decided to move on 8 years later, met this man, tried to be as good as possible because I was so much in love with him and never wanted to lose him. After a year he started treating like I am nothing Before I noticed, he had a wife, two girlfriends all having his children. What!!!!!!!!!!!! he was so good to me that I behaved silly whenever around him, I thought it was love. One day he told me, it's over, that killed me. I am still dead, I don't trust, I don't believe in love, I am crying day and night that why can't I find love and have a man of my own. Do I have a problem...I wish I could but if I don't thank God I have learnt a lesson.

    Mary Submitted 7/10/2013
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  • I may be only 13 but I understand this. It's the same with me and my ex, except I never found someone new. I'm still stuck on him and it hurts me to know that he's with another girl....

    Samantha Submitted 12/11/2013
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  • I'm only 14 but right now, I am in love with some guy who lives all the way in Texas. He says he loves me but he has a damn girlfriend. I encouraged him to date her, kind of as a joke, and he actually did. It hurt, I regret encouraging him, but he's happy with her. I'm unsure if he truly even loves me. I think he's really being honest to me. And now I'm deciding to let him go.

    Elaine Submitted 1/22/2014
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