Hurting Poem

This is based on a true story of mine... I'm so hurt. "Waiting for his call" that never comes.

Raindrops

© Dhana May C. Baysa
As I watched the raindrops fall,
I waited for his call
It was dark that night
that it was all darkness at my sight

Every time the night would came,
I always feel the same
the pain I kept inside
the tears I cried

the way I pretend
that I just care with my trends
the feelings that I can't say
the problems on my way

because you hurt me so,
I will say goodbye
it's for our sake
and for me not to be fake

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Published: Jan 2008

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