Breaking Up Poem

Hi I wrote this poem when my boyfriend for a year left me for another woman this talks about how he took everything away from me that made me who I was he broke my heart and took everything away that ever made me happy about my self.

I Lost It

© Carrie Berry
You took my fears away,
And made them true,
You took my love away,
And ripped my heart out too,
You took my laughter away,
And my happiness too,
And let all my sadness,
And tears get through,
The rest of me that was left,
Also left with you,
I lost my self ,
When I lost you.

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Published: Aug 2008

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  • I fell in love with a men 20 years older than me he told me he loved me and I also loved him till the day he raped me and I was infected by HIV. I hate him and feel so lonely I haven't told any one about this.

    Amanda Umthatha Submitted Apr 2012
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  • I fell in love with a guy 7 years older than me but we didn't go that far. He was so nice and generous I miss him so god damn much it isn't even funny!!! xo

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