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I am a single mother just trying to get my poems out there so all can enjoy I'm 26 with three kids I live in a reservation called big cove NB Canada

In My Dreams

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My Spirits' been hurt
So deeply by your actions.
It literally turned me off
Of all other attractions.

You were the one who
Broke down my wall,
Opened my heart to love
Not just to you, but to all.

On a pedestal
I held you up, you
Were what made me live
and never to give up.

What a fool I've become
To trust you to love me
How blind I was, how
Couldn't I see?

You were my world or
so it seems,
When my eyes are closed,
In my dreams.

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Published: Aug 2008

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  • I am a young women who has been betrayed by men all my life.

    Deserae Submitted Aug 2008
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  • This is one of the best poems I've read ever! It gets to the point and it something that she wants and is telling the world that it rarely comes true.

    rachel Submitted Aug 2008
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  • Well, this poem is great in relation to the novel the Great Gatsby, and King Lear. I used this poem to apply it both the stories, and I will do a presentation on this soon. Thanks Loretta, and now you will be more popular because I will be doing an analysis of your poem

    Toronto Submitted Jul 2010
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  • I have been seeing or was seeing the same man for 6 years. we always had friends staying with us as we couldn't turn them away. my best friend of "20" years my "SISTER" I moved in because she was going through a divorce. little did I know she had also been seeing my boyfriend for at least 6 months I feel like such a fool and the bad thing is I don't care about the man. The friendship has broken my heart you just can't trust anyone anymore it'' been 4 months and I'm still grieving. any advice?

    Tonja Submitted Aug 2010
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