First Love Poem

In this poem I am describing my feelings when I first met the boy who was my first love. He has read this poem but he doesn't still know that it's written for him.

When I First Saw You

© Efi
Vulnerable before I found you
Lost in the lonely streets of my heart
I loved you since I first saw you
and happiness reborn from my pointless past.
Angels were laughing,
an endless dream of red roses.
You looked at me with your fragile sight
I looked at you with my soul
and then our story began
and still going on.
A spontaneous dark moment
and then a spark which led me to you

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Published: Dec 2007

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