First Love Poem

Poem Questioning If Loved Back

Wondering if I am loved back

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© Nora more by Nora

Published: Dec 2007

Loving You So Much

The moment I think about you
I go to another world
A world where you love me too
And where I can never be hurt

The truth is I don't know what to say
My mind goes completely blank
I have never in my life lost my way
But my heart with your love simply sank

If letting go was a choice
Then I definitely would
But I can't control the strong voice
That's telling me I never should

I have no clue
On how I should let you go
What is it that you do?
That's making me love you so…

Maybe loving you isn't a mistake
Maybe I can close my eyes and smile
Maybe in your presence my heart wouldn't break
Maybe I can just dream for a while…

I sometimes wonder if you feel the same
I wonder if you think of me
I sometimes wonder if you silently call my name
I wonder if you'll ever see…

In the beginning I thought it was fake
I didn't think I'd go this far
I thought it was just a mistake
Now I can't stop wondering where you are

The question is do you care?
Do you even know?
Will you always be there?
Will you ever let me go?

If for any reason I cried
Would you take all the pain away?
If for any reason you lied
Would I still want you to stay?

My love for you is way too strong
For me to simply forget
Some people might think it's wrong
But your love is the one thing I shan't regret.

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  • by Donae,Johannesburg
  • 7/3/2014

This poem is awesome, it reminds me of my love. It's like we think the same things. He loved me and I loved him. Our relationship was so awesome, I can't explain it. When I look at him I go blank and I was deeply in love with him. But, now we're just friends

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  • by Nesha, Florida
  • 2/18/2014

I really love this poem, this guy was my crush, now we're talking and we have gotten to know each other, he's way older, and the first month told me he loved me, but now because of the disagreements we've had I don't know if he feels the way I do. I can never get him out my head, I try but I can't. He even told me he can't give me a relationship now. But I don't know if I should move on or not? Should I tell him how I feel? I think I'm deeply in love with him, I can't seem to move on.

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  • by Maddie, New Jersey
  • 2/11/2014

I hear you. My first love was very painful. But now I think this:
Pain molds you into the person you become. A challenge. One life. Never waste it. Never lose it. Beauty a curse- I didn't choose it. In school I'm stuck, but I stay clueless. Changing takes effort, people take time, my life is just a book with out a bind. Closing my chapters, sealing my pages, finding my true love will take me ages.

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  • by Mary
  • 11/13/2013

I'm in love with this guy who's in 7th grade named Thomas. I am in 7th grade to. But Thomas loves another girl. It breaks my heart but my heart tells me that I should keep loving him but my mind tells me to forget about him. It hurts me every time and he even knows I like him but he doesn't know I love him. I know I'm a little too young to love someone but we have known each other since kindergarten and we just met and he already loves some else so yea that's my story

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  • by Ashton Prins, Cape Town
  • 9/5/2013

When experiencing first love, it is overwhelming and amazing. This poem is a perfect example for us to think whether or not our spouse is the perfect one.
Hey Nora, you have talent of writing amazing poetry. Although your ex-spouse inspired your writing, but use Love to continue, so you can further your encouragement to those who find it difficult in love. I am inspired by this poem and I believe many are.

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  • by Amy, Johannesburg
  • 9/2/2013

My word! I totally relate to this poem. Absolutely gorgeous. Totally reminds me of my first love. Thank you for posting!

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  • by Daffodillies, Vietnam
  • Jun 2013

Thanks very much, Nora. Your poem has touched me most emotionally. It naturally went into the bottom of my heart and stayed there. But I didn't know whether I might, or should, share it with the person I've been loving and just bloodily broken heart in saying goodbye with him about two months ago.

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  • by Denise, Ballito
  • May 2013

Hi , I met this guy online and we have been chatting for the last 2 weeks , I'm completely in love, in the beginning I didn't trust him because I thought it was just a scam, too good to be true, I broke up with him then he convinced me , it was all real, We still haven't met in person, but the chemistry and the love is overpowering. I know that this is true and will last until eternity.

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  • by Caitlin Smryna
  • Oct 2012

Love is hard to find but I found it. I am so happy to be with him, and people said love is not true. It is. I found him and I will love him forever.

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  • by England
  • Sep 2012

This poem rings true for me. I spent years up until now wondering what could have been. I think about him a lot and miss them so but I guess it's not meant to be....

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  • by Jaswin, Abbotsford,Canada
  • Jul 2012

This poem reminds me of my crush. I am ready to die for him. But the question to myself is does he even know my full name. I wonder about him day and night. but thinking about him is it really going to make him like me. I wish he knew more about me rather them my name.

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  • by Nora, Kuwait
  • Nov 2010

hey everyone, this is Nora, thank you all for your comments, I'm glad this poem has touched you, to be honest I stopped writing poems partly because the person who inspired both the poems I posted isn't in my life anymore and I feel like I can't write without having him back...

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  • by Cory Moore
  • May 2010

This poem when I read it, it made me want to share it with others. It just really touched me.

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  • by Anika
  • Mar 2009

That was definitely one of the best poems I've ever read! It's sad and also really beautiful, the way you describe is how many people think of their First Love :) I love it!

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  • by Edgar Hernandez
  • Jan 2009

This is such a great poem I can relate to. When I first started dating my girlfriend I didn't think it'd last so long but then things started to turn around and I fell in love with her. I'm not sure if she's with me or if she feels the same way. Anyway as time went by she slowly crushed my heart into small pieces and like a fool I told her to keep it. I slowly fixed myself up and we got back together. And now ever since that time she cheated on me I ask myself....does she really love me like she says she does? Am I a spare? Will I ever truly understand if what we have is special or not.

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  • by dan
  • Dec 2008

Made me tear up, it is exactly what I feel for my first and only love.

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