Romantic Poem

My name is Brandee Hilbert. I am 28 years old, and I have lived in the state of Kentucky my whole life. I really love to write poems. Writing poems helps me deal with many different emotions in a more productive way. As most people know, "Life ain't easy"! I wrote this poem a few years ago, for a guy that I will always love. This is one of my favorite poems that I've ever written. I was introduced to poetry from a girl I lived with in Lexington at the Home Of The Crittenden, I was about 13.

Making Love

© Brandee Lyann Hilbert
Underneath the moonlit sky, beneath a blanket of stars, I lay with you in a land afar.

It's so quiet, all I can hear, is my breath, I vaguely take, with you so near.

You have my body bound. I'm lost in your presence, where I can't be found.

You kiss my neck, it feels so nice. You have me feeling so enticed.

As my body emerges, it yearns, and it urges, to feel your embrace; and to taste your taste.

As you put it in, a little smile grins. Should I whisper faster? Or, should I scream for my Master?

Your pulling my hair, I feel, as if I were floating on air. As I tremble, and begin to shake, you quiver, and quake.

Underneath the moonlit sky, beneath a blanket of stars, I'm yours, wherever you are.


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Published: May 2012

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