Girlfriend Poem

I am not poet in any sense, but one day I found myself pouring my heart out on paper for the woman I love and the result was this poem. Please enjoy and provide feedback if at all possible. Thanks you for your time and Thanks for reading.

Shadowing Eternity

© Oscar Grullon
A special place for you and me
An undying bond to guide us free
Loneliness blocking the day
Our Love lighting the way

Your gentle touch
Your smiling face
There is no corner
No dark place

Our passion flowing in the waves
My heart stands still
Awaiting your pace

Our love, withstanding time
Diminishing doubt, in our mind
There is no place I rather be…
Than in your heart and in your dreams…

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Published: Mar 2011

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  • I was reading this poem because I wanted to get some ideas on how to tell my girlfriend that I love her and this poem is exactly what I was looking for.

    Ray Johnson, Inglewood CA Submitted 10/5/2012
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  • I needed to know how to tell this girl I'm in love with her but couldn't quite come up with the words but this poem proved to be the perfect interpretation of my thoughts.

    Romario, Ontario Canada Submitted 4/9/2013
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