Birthday Poem

I'm thirteen and its my sisters 21st birthday soon, I am sending her 21 birthday cards and I want to put a poem in them, so I hope this poem is ok? please decide for me...

21 Years Today

© Lauramay
for thirteen years my sister you've been,
and I'm quite sure you've not always been keen,
on me ruining your stuff and copying your style,
but you always forgot that after a while.

the love we share goes unprepared,
because it comes so naturally,
you see the love we have is close,
it's like our own sung melody.

I don't know how to say it,
but believe me that it's true,
there's no sister in the world,
that could ever compare to you.

so I'm wishing you a happy birthday,
one only I can say,
I say this from the heart,
have the greatest 21st birthday.

I love you Emma, happy birthday x

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Published: Nov 2010

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