Funny Valentines Day Poem

"There's nothing as sweet as love and sugar, and when you put them both together..." I did this on a big construction paper heart for my fiancÚ last year. He really liked all the candies and he's actually still got the whole thing, nothing touched (or eaten). See if you can find the candy in this poem, there's one in each line.

Candy Love

© Terra Mcdonald
Fly away with me my dove
To a forbidden place where the skittles meet the rainbow
Lay under the milky way with me
And lets gaze at the star burst together
Just you and me, sweet bliss
When the moon begins to eclipse we'll be in each others arms
I never knew how much of a sweet tart you could be
There are zero people like you
Your my lifesaver in this unforgiving world
I love all your little snickers
And I feel safe when you wrap your butterfingers around me
I want to share all of your kisses
Now and later, always and forever
Your all the payday I'll ever need
I wouldn't trade you for 100 grand
All because I love my sweet gummy bear

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Published: Feb 2010

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