Dream Poem

I wrote this after having a dream about this guy I like

The Perfect Dream

© Miranda S
Waves beating on the sand
There we sit hand in hand
Waves crash down
And I wipe away my frown

The sun begins to set
It seems like we've just met
But we've known each other for a while
Now just the thought of you makes me smile

We begin to walk
And we start to talk
Our steps are in sync
I can't even think

He stops and looks at me
I look up and he is all I see
He leans in
And it's like the perfect sense

But I always wake up
And realize It was all just a dream


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Published: May 2008

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  • I relate to this. Thank you so much for posting. It just makes me feel like bursting my feelings out. I love someone, and it's impossible for him to love me but .. Nothing can break my love for him.

    Keicy, Hawaii Submitted Mar 2010

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