Goodbye Love Poem

This was written at what I thought was the end of my relationship. My guy has since pulled his head out of his ***. We still have some extremely difficult moments, but who doesn't when all of life's a learning experience? Hang in there girls...it may get better!

Animal

© Stephanie Wilda
the poor thing...it howls
audible pain
it thrashes around
trying to regain its feet
but it is broken
but a shadow of what it once was
unrecognizable
painting all around it red with
its own impending doom
I don't know how it still lives
Tears burn my eyes as I realize
I will have to end it's misery
because it howls too loud
and tries too hard
and hurts too much
as it dies in my chest
with every thought of you


Goodbye

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Published: Apr 2009

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  • I just wanted to say this is beautiful...and it's exactly how I feel as I'm losing my wife...

    Jon, Colorado Submitted Sep 2011
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