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Life Without You

© Nikki Wilfong

Published on February 2008

Me without you
is like a leafless fall,
a snowless winter,
and a flowerless spring.

Me without you
is like a colorless rainbow,
a sunless day,
and a starless night.

Me without you
is like the ocean without a wave,
the beach without sand,
and a flameless fire.

Me without you
is like a book without words,
a man without a face,
and a child with no name.



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Techniques this poem uses:

  • This poem is made up of quatrains, which are 4 line stanzas.
    Read more about stanzas
  • The author uses similes to describe what life is like without another person in it. Similes compare two objects or ideas using the words "like" or "as".

    • is like a leafless fall,
    • is like the colorless rainbow,
    • is like a flameless fire,
    • is like a book without words
    Read more about similes
  • There is a strong sense of structure. The author starts each stanza with "Me without you," and then continues to describe what life would be like without that person.

    Me without you,
    is like a colorless rainbow,
    a sunless day,
    and a starless night.

    Read more about structure in poetry

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