Valentines Day Poem to Girlfriend

Well this is the first poem I have ever wrote, I decided to give it to my girlfriend I thought I was losing. Rhyme is not the point of this poem, it's more of a story of the love you can't find. Instead people have to give it to you, and you don't always see it. As for people who think poems are only about the rhyming, I believe that they come from your heart as this one did mine. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

My Heart Forever

For this Valentines day,
I don't have much money,
No rings, or a car, or a special necklace,
What I instead decided to give you is something priceless,
It's something every girl wants,
No girl seems to find,
Money can't buy,
What some people call the meaning of life,
And what others say only God himself can award you.

What is this priceless treasure?
It's something I can't give any other girl in the world,
Something you cannot return,
And the only treasure you will have after you die.

When you see God at the gates to Heaven,
He will ask if you have found true love?
You will say no I didn't,
It is then he will look at you strange,
You will ask what's wrong and he will say,
If you didn't find true love,
Then why do you have two hearts?
At this time you will remember,
That it was me who gave you,

My heart forever...

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Published: Feb 2009

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  • This is excellent! I am not much of a poet either, but I do believe that it is an excellent way to express your true feelings.

    Andy, Az Submitted Feb 2012
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  • Wow this is touching, I love it!! I believe that a girl can't resist such a story & it's fresh lovely it shows the feeling of love. Don't love poems but this one its exciting.

    Lindokuhle, Hazyview Submitted 2/14/2013
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