Love Poem by Teens

I wrote this poem my freshman year of highschool when I found out I would be moving that summer. It's about the one girl I never told how I felt because we were friends and I didn't want to mess that up.

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Published: Oct 2008

She Doesn't Know I Love Her

When did my feelings get so deep
Why did they take that big long leap
Going from friend to crush
What a rush
And I don't think she knows

Since when did her smile make me go weak
Since when did her tears make mine start to leak
Why does this happen when I'm always so strong
When people called me Superman I guess they were wrong
And I don't think she knows

When she talks I cant help but watch her lips
To notice their shape and curves when they dip
Wait, why am I looking? I don't even know
And I cant help but wonder if she even knows

Her beautiful eyes are nothing like ours
They're so deep and bright you'd believe they were stars
They pour forth emotions in raging rivers
They could make even me believe that Santa always delivers
And still she has no idea

Her body is perfection though she denies it
It makes my head spin with every glance I give
She could put any man under her spell
But she doesn't know how I feel and I don't think I'll tell

I love how she looks and who she is
And how she makes me feel like this
I love how she's beautiful and smart with a heart so strong
And how she lives every day like nothing could go wrong
Still she hasn't got a clue

Now school is at an end on the 11th at noon
I wonder if she cares that I'm moving soon
We're parting that day after schools many months
I just wish I could have kissed her just once

Now that I've said it with my poetic skill
I don't think she knew, and now she never will

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  • by Avery, Ok
  • 5/23/2014

Okay.
Number one, this is the sweetest thing EVER.
Number two, if a guy wrote a poem for me, I would marry him. Not even kidding.
Number three, marry me please.
Number four, this is the last thing. This is the best thing ever. I NEED a boy to write something like this for me.

That's all.

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  • by Sierra, WI
  • 4/28/2014

You should really tell her!! she might feel the same. I fell in love with my best friend and then me moved and I never got the chance to tell him and I regret it awfully!!

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  • by Jesús, Mexico
  • 4/1/2014

The last time I've felt like you was about 6 years ago, and no other girl has ever made my knees weak until I started the university; my eyes came across this little girl, she isn't as hot and fit as her friends but still looks good. She has a killer smile and the cutest laugh.
I've enjoyed the few times we went out, using my friend's friends as excuse to see her. The bad part is that she might know I like her, because in the past weeks she has stopped seeing me and I can feel she's avoiding me. I don't blame her because unfortunately she has a boyfriend. And for the worst my classmates know it. I wish I've never met her because now I can't stop thinking on her.
And it's even harder to express my self in English since it's not my first language.

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  • by Hanna, Michigan
  • 3/23/2014

This story has made me understand how guys feel when they are in this situation. It has touched my heart, my mind, and my soul. I hope you get to kiss that girl! :)

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  • by Lydell, Washington State
  • 1/27/2014

Your poem is awesome I am going through the exact same thing with a woman I have had a crush on for a long time. Because I am so shy I can't tell her because I don't want to get rejected. I feel that would hurt our friendship. Even though I want to and love poetry. I may have to follow your lead and write a poem because it very possible I will be moving out of the state we go to school in after I graduate.

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  • by Jemima, England
  • 1/16/2014

This was amazing! It made me so sad, you should tell her. Reading this just shows how much you really care, at least send her this poem, maybe she will finally understand.

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  • by Anthony
  • 12/24/2013

Look my friend if I were in your shoes now, I'd find any way to tell her your true feelings before someone else grabs her and you will never forgive yourself. Let her know. I still think of my ex girl so much and I truly wish she was here with me today instead of my wife who I am not in love with. Please give your friend a call for what happens if the guy she meets hurts her, give her a call or send a letter with that poem for she will understand how you feel for her. I hope you have told her by now.

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  • by Megan, Kansas
  • Sep 2013

This sound like something my best friend would say to me. He moved this summer to Washington State and I am in Kansas. I liked him and he liked me. We both were scared if we said anything our friendship would be hurt. We finally got up the courage to say something, and to our surprise we both felt the same way. The only problem is that we live (While I am at College) 1,141 miles as the crow flies and 1,525 miles driving distance. I know how you feel because I felt like that for so long before and after her left, but after telling him I feel so much happier, even though I miss him so much more.

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  • by Tee , New Orleans
  • Sep 2013

So I fell for this girl and she came from South Africa little did I know she had someone back home as our feelings started blending and we got strong she told me about the other and I was crushed then the other proposed so they could be together she told me that to so I cried cause well I didn't know what else to do she couldn't decide who she wanted and the thought of losing her made me sick to my stomach. I love hey but I don't think she understand cause if she did I don't think it would be this hard for her to pick one.

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  • by Jazz
  • Jun 2013

This is by far the best poem I have read so far, great job. You should definitely tell her because I found out on the last day of school that this guy liked me and I have had a crush on him for quite some time. Sadly it's too late and now we will never be together.
P.S any girl would be happy to go out with a guy who is able to write such lovely poetry about them!!!!

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  • by Dawlton, Mabank, TX
  • May 2013

I feel your pain. I'm in love with this one girl and she acts like I don't exist. It seems I scream but no one can hear but my that's how my life is.

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  • by Ashton
  • May 2013

I know this story personally. Problem was, she did know, just probably not enough. This is my favorite poem I know now and just reaffirms how I feel.

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  • by Sam
  • Mar 2013

I thought this was very beautiful. I know how you felt, to be so close yet so far away at the same time....

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  • by Mary, IN
  • Mar 2013

I have a guy I like and the weird thing is this guy is my brother's friend and I know he doesn't know I like him.

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  • by Gabi, US
  • Dec 2012

That was the most amazing poem. Your a good hearted man bro. Wow, I can't seem to come up with any words to think how to describe this. It's so sad yet so uplifting. Made me tear, and I'm a guy! Doesn't mean sh*t when poems like this are written. Great story, written just magnificently, but truly saddening.

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  • by Faithy, USA
  • Sep 2012

Oh my word, it's so sweet. If this poem was written about me I would cry! It's so adorable!

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  • by Moose, UK
  • Aug 2012

Incredible piece of writing! Brings back memories. We always remember the one that we missed. Others come, others go. You know about them whether good or bad but the one that got away feels unfinished - a story without an ending - we never will know - destined to a life of wondering - what if...?

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  • by Monty, Usa
  • Jun 2012

Hey man, read this and a lot like most others I'm also going through the same thing, I've known this girl for 4 years now and she is the only person on this earth I would ever want to be with. Your poem makes me want to write something for her but I'm terrible with words, I wish I had enough balls to just tell her straight up.

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  • by Josh
  • May 2012

That is the best poem I have ever heard if that doesn't get girls I don't know what would

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  • by Jennifer B., Texas
  • Jan 2012

WOW!!
Even though I am only 14 and writing I would have to say your the best poet I have ever read of. (:

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  • by C.J, Arizona
  • Jan 2012

You're amazing! I had the same thing happen to me almost three years ago. I wish you could've told her. ;]

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This is a really good poem. I would still tell her how you feel. It would be better in person. If you can't see her then email her your poem, at least she will know how you feel. Good Luck!

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  • by Alondra
  • Aug 2011

This is so sad I had passed thru that to but I had to face my fear even though if he never liked me it could ruin our friendship but I loved him so much and I had to. It's better to have told to never have told at all.

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This is just amazing. how can two different people be experiencing the same thing. dude, this is awesome.

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  • by Cheyenne, Canada
  • Jun 2011

I feel like this right now. I've known this boy since I was seven and I'm fourteen now we have been Bestfriends since and I like him, but I don't know if he knows how do I tell him and not ruin our friendship?

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  • by Courtney
  • May 2011

I love it! I feel the same way, because I like my best friend. He just doesn't know it or at least I don't think he does. I don't know how I could tell him and still be friends. I told him when we first met but he said he just wanted to be friends and that he was glad we're friends. But that was almost a year ago that he told me that, and I really hope that his feelings changed.

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  • by Cristian, Argentina
  • May 2011

Dude, that is just amazing. This is the poem I was looking for! Congrats!

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  • by Naairah, Canada
  • May 2011

Hello, my name is Naairah and I want to say that your poem really touched me so much. Last year, I was in grade 7 and in my class there was this guy that I always hung out with. Eventually, I fell in love with him in like January. We always used to hung out together in class and yeah.. flirt. This year, I don't talk to him, and my best friend is friends with his best friend so she asked him who he likes and he said it was me. I don't know what to do.

Just that, she is a very lucky girl to have someone like her so much :)

- Naaïrah P

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  • by Jay Mann (Yes, That's My Name)
  • Apr 2011

Wow dude. I literally read this and I just want to walk up to her and tell it straight from the heart because that's what she deserves. But she just got out of a relationship and she wants to forget him but she's so in love with him that she can't. But as she was telling the four of us about this she doesn't realize that she's been the girl who brought love into my life with my first kiss and the first and only time I've made love. But she thinks nothing of it and it tears my heart apart because the way she feels about this guy isn't even half as much as I love her and she moved in with him for a good while so I forgot about her but now she's back and everything flooded upon me when we all hung out last night and I'm afraid I'll never be able to confess my love to her no matter how amazing she is because I'm afraid I'm just not that guy but she's that girl. She's 18 now and I'm only 17 so it can't happen till I'm old enough but by that time shell be gone again.

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  • by Kaila
  • Mar 2011

This is really cute, like no doubt I feel the same way about my bestfriend and I don't think I will ever tell them but I kind of do because I don't want something to happen and then I would've never even gotten the chance. . .

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  • by Victoria, North Carolina
  • Mar 2011

WOW that's an amazing poem!!!
I don't even think my boy friend has a poetic bone in him.
But I still love him!!!
I think you should find her on Facebook or somewhere and tell her how you feel and maybe even let her read the poem!!!

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  • by John, Dallas Texas
  • Mar 2011

I fell the same way): I mean how do you tell someone that YOU LOVE THEM): you don't know how they feel about you): but I like the poem it was really GOOD keep it up(:

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  • by Sofia, Finland
  • Feb 2011

This poem made me gasp ! Maybe the best love poem ever ! I cried

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  • by Amy, WA
  • Jan 2011

I loved the poem, romantic and sweet, I can only hope a guy talks that way about me. I hope you find the courage to tell her someday.

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  • by Shilowe,California
  • Jan 2011

One of the best ways I have ever seen this feeling described. I have the same thing going on, only difference is that I came back and we are still "best friends" even though other people can't tell that there is more to it. Props to you and your poetic skills, if you can, and have not already told this girl how you feel you should. It will be worth it.

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  • by Madison
  • Dec 2010

I don't wanna sound inconsiderate of the feelings that made you write this poem but its AMAZING! I've never reading anything like it, and I think a lot of people can connect to it, (including myself).

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  • by Bryan
  • Dec 2010

After reading this poem I realized that it sounds a lot like me. I like this girl but I was always afraid to tell her. now I know that I am not the only one who has feelings for someone who doesn't know.

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  • by <3 Haven
  • Nov 2010

I love this. I feel the exact same about a boy, but I'm not moving, but I don't know how to tell him but this poem makes me want to tell him so thanks for giving me courage

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  • by Johnathan Crutchfield
  • Oct 2010

I write poetry because its a passion of mine, and this was beyound touching (no homo).

I can't relate but I soon will because I am a freshman now and if I were to move I would feel what your feeling. We've grown so close as if TRUE FRIENDS has appeared in front of me. I feel like if I were to ask, then it would mess everything up, because being like literally really close friends is something that I feel like I can't give up. My heart is big for this girl, better believe it too, but I don't want to take any risk's.

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  • by Rachel
  • Oct 2010

This poem is.. absolutely amazing I don't know what to say I can just connect with it so much. I'm going through the same thing with this girl (yep I'm a girl) and that's the problem. Your poem made me feel so much better about not being the only one going through heart ache! Thanks keep on writing you're great!
Rach :)

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  • by Booby
  • Oct 2010

I remember going through something like this , its hard to take that first step but I hope next time you will be able to stand up and try to go after the girl=] cause you know you will regret it so next time if you haven't already just try and you will find it was worth the risk=]

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  • by Michael Morgan
  • Sep 2010

"it hurts so much to love and be rejected but it is far worse to never take that chance and tell them how you feel." Quote by me I know how you feel and I didn't take that chance and I regret it to this day I did it my 8th grade year I'm a senior now. I wish I would of told her.

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  • by Carolyn, NM
  • Aug 2010

AWWWWWWW! I loved it!!!
Any girl who reads this is saying that it is so cute and wishing you where talking to them. I know I am. I think if you ever get the chance to tell a girl how you feel about her you should tell her through a poem they are so romantic. I hope you got the chance to tell that one girl you liked her.

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  • by Kara, TX
  • Jul 2010

I love it!
Any girl who reads that is wishing that you were talking about them.
If you ever let that girl read your poem I guarantee she will melt!
I hope you meet her again and tell her :D Good Luck!!

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awww. this is soo cute! I love it

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  • by Bjorline, Norway
  • Apr 2010

OMG..I love it..
that girl is so lucky...
I hope You'll meet her again and tell her how you feel...be happy..

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  • by Charm, Philippines
  • Feb 2010

I just read your poem and I'm strucked...love it! I hope you told her about your feelings for her because she's so lucky, she got a guy like you. I like the way you describe her. That also shows what kind of man you are. . .God Bless!! :)

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  • by Chris Todd, Wrightsville, GA
  • Dec 2009

Hey, I just wanted to say that I am guy going through the same thing and its nuts.... I have been looking for someone who gets me but so far no luck... I'm 17 and it sucks...

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  • by Dcs, Detroit
  • Nov 2009

I am going through the same thing right now. I am in matric and tomorrow we write our last paper, then I we go our separate ways. I know this girl for 9 years, and I didn't tell her how I feel about her. She is dating someone else at the moment :'(, but I still think she should be with me.

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  • by Alisha
  • Oct 2009

That's really nice, most lad's would make it sound real cheesy well that's my opinion, but you didn't. I read your poem twice and both times it made me feel, well I cant explain how it made me feel. I'm kinder going through the same thing, but I ended up telling the lad how I felt we drifted apart, getting closer now. if I was you I wouldn't be afraid to tell this girl you like, at least she knows how you felt, cause maybe deep down she feels same but she's also scared to tell you.
x

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  • by angela
  • Oct 2009

if you have a way to get in touch with her it would never hurt to tell her now

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  • by Lona
  • Apr 2009

that is so lovely to write about your best girl friend, I'm having the same problem with my boy friend, he doesn't know either

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  • by john
  • Jan 2009

dude your poem is like the best one I heard...nice job writing it, to be honest with you I'm actually kind of going through the same thing

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  • by Mara
  • Nov 2008

oh wow
this is a really good poem
its such a pretty way to describe a girl

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  • by keia
  • Oct 2008

I use to go to until I moved this summer I had the same thing happen to me it was painful I still find my self thing about it

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