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This is soooooooo cute but can you write a poem about this guy liking a girl please, I am in such a situation that I don't know what to do, I like this one guy that doesn't like me back and...

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When Will You Notice Me

© Kayla more by Kayla

Published on September 2011

What do I have to do to get you to notice me?
Change my hair, the way I walk.
My clothes, the way I talk.
We've known each other for some time now
yet I'm still invisible to you.
My feelings run deep and how
I wish you only knew.
I see your face every time I close my eyes
To me you just seem so different from the other guys.
To you I'm just a friend
Nothing more, nothing less
I settle for friendship in the end
Because I don't want to make a mess.
Instead I'll keep my secret to myself
And take my pride back off the shelf.
Until one day you finally see
That you and I were meant to be.
I'll wait for now but not too long
Because sooner or later I'll be gone.
So when will you notice me?


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  • by Charlize
  • 2 years ago

This is soooooooo cute but can you write a poem about this guy liking a girl please, I am in such a situation that I don't know what to do, I like this one guy that doesn't like me back and then there's this other guy that makes me feel really special but I don't know what to do...........

Your poems are really cool

  • by Amber Rider
  • 2 years ago

This poem has touched me because there is this guy named John-Michael and he has had my heart. I wouldn't call us friends, but there is the every once in a while "Hey! How are you?" This poem has told what almost every teen girl goes though. I have had a crush on JM for sometime now but he has a girl friend. I don't know what to do. He is perfect and I am a geek.

  • by Diamond, California
  • 3 years ago

This really made me happy and inspired because there is this boy who I have liked for three years and his name is Xavier and I know him and he knows me and he knows that I like him but sometimes he acts like he doesn't remember me so I feel like I could do anything but I still don't wanna ask him to go out with me because I feel like it would be weird and that I will be sad at the end but I feel like I will have to move on because it didn't happen and it probably never happen any way so I gotta move on.

  • by Shardai, United Kingdom
  • 3 years ago

I've had a crush on this boy in my school and he knows I like him but I've always wondered if he notices me. I'm in year nine now and he's in all of my classes and he's my friend and I haven't talked to him for ages and this poem has helped me a lot and I might just show it to him :)

  • by K.Lee
  • 3 years ago

This poem is really good I'm a teen and I can relate to it. I think most teens go through the same phase I'm going through, please keep on writing more of these poems.

  • by Wafa, United Kingdom
  • 3 years ago

It's like amazing...this is what I want to tell to my crush...it have been 4 years I have been waiting to him...hope this poem will make a end to my hope :)

  • by Jennifer, United States
  • 4 years ago

I have this big crush on my best friend and we used to like each other but I don't think he likes me anymore. I've been writing poems and this just really inspired me because maybe if I show him this he will get what I am trying to say! Please keep writing these types of poems!

  • by Mary, Landover Maryland
  • 4 years ago

This has really touched me I feel the same way about someone I know but he doesn't notice me at all.

  • by Aubrey, London
  • 4 years ago

HI I wanted to make a song out of this poem. I'm just 15 but I really like it, I'll mention you in the video on YouTube please

  • by Sade Stewart, Chicago Illnois
  • 4 years ago

I went through this same situation with my friend, it's like what do I have to do for this boy to recognize me. I said to myself do I have to change everything about me, for he can recognize me because this ain't working right. I did thing's for this person to notice me & he did at times. But every girl try to get in his way & asking question, & they asking me question like what's going on, I just say it in a funny smile way & be fun by saying it. It's not they business anyway I like your poem Kayla keep writing these type of poem I like this.

  • by Shimy, Kissimmee Fl
  • 4 years ago

I love this poem. ' really cool it actually inspired me so much that I showed this poem to my crush and he loved it! Then like two days later he asks me out!!! I was so happy!

Thanks for writing this poem!
You rock!!!:)

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