Teen Depression Poem

Hey...My names Heather and this poem really touched me because it relates to my life itself. Right now I'm hurting and dealing with a bunch of drama this girl in my school is causing me. I also have a broken heart from my ex boyfriend. He cheated on me the day after he told me he would love me forever and never leave me. I feel like I rather die than live this horrible hell hole. But this poem really got to me and I LOVED it.

This poem really touched me. I have been going through just about the same thing. I dated this guy for a year and he basically cheated on me over and over but I couldn't leave him and now that we are not together it just gets worse and worse every day. He is constantly trying to make my life miserable and it works. We had everything planned out and now I have nothing. I loved him and gave him everything but he gave me nothing in return but a broken heart.

wow amazing poem, I mean I can almost relate to every line. I just got in to poetry and I'm trying to make my own stuff but, it doesn't come anywhere as good as yours.

it's good to know I am not the only one who feels like this good poem nicely expressed I feel the same

I relate to this poem so much its unbeleavable..and I mean every word. I know exactly what your feeling in this poem and its a horrible thing to go through especially when you have no one to talk to about it and nothing seems to make it any easier. I know what its like to put on a fake smile everyday just so no one will ask you what's wrong and then if they do you lie and say nothing when every possible thing is wrong. when you do talk to someone they just don't understand and you cant explain it because sometimes you don't understand either. this poem made me cry and I really related to it I also have poems on this site about depression but they're nothing like this. I really really liked this poem.

just don't cut yourself ^_^. I thought this poem was really relateful (from the comments lol) I think this poem was really good, keep it up. this poem is like a been there done that thing to me. awesome job!

wow, I love the poem it relates a lot to me as the way I feel. Its like every single day I have to live with a fake smile, a smile that I don't even feel. The only reason you smile or laugh its so people won't know what's wrong with you because you don't want them to ask you what's wrong with you, and then having to tell them your story is worst, so the only thing you have left is lie to them, and keep everything inside you even though its killing you. I know how it feels to feel alone and not have one person to talk to about anything. Nobody can understand how you feel except yourself, and sometimes you just don't even understand neither. It's even worst when you don't have anymore the person you love so much.

good poem..loved it, felt every word. It's good to know I'm not alone

Wow...I completely understand you. I mean I talk to an adult friend, I haven't told her because she's just going through hard times too. SOOO.. I've been trying to do this on my own and its not going well. Everything is getting worse. But my friend she is great and I thank her for everything she's tried to do for me.

This poem touched me so much. My life feels like I am here for nothing all I am here for is to ruin other peoples wonderful lives. Me and my brother got caught in trouble with the cops, which ruined my life, his, my moms, everyone in my family.
People around me that I call friends are backstabbers, and man stealers.
I am ready to move on to heaven I think I am not meant to be here.:(