I love this poem!❤ It shows how life would be without friends and is so amazing. 5 out of 5
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Ann, Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. It's always nice hearing from you and reading your poetry as well.
I have always had trouble seeing the good in things but this poem makes me smile and think thats so true.
This poem really hit home today. Fell into a really bad habit and am now struggling to quit. 2 years increasing to weekly, at periods daily. Foolishly seduced taking its hand and led astray. Willingly watching it replace so many opportunities for progress and happiness. Why why why? It's apparent that yes yes yes becomes the default setting and I do remember the moment I realized I was already in dangerous territory. Felt like falling into a vortex. Thank you for the inspiration to reflect and the thought of a sunnier day that surely keeps the flame of hope alight
" It is what you choose for your life." This is the issue, life is what we make of it. Sadly, we sometimes make mistakes or even commit sins. We appreciate what we had, not what we have. Still, we always seek forgiveness. God is merciful.
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A lovely poem - very moving. I could visualise everything you wrote about so clearly. Well done, best wishes, Ann
I really loved this poem because it is almost similar to my story about summer I really love this poem. If it was possible I could just make this poem a tattoo on my stomach
I have struggled with self harm for years and on going but reading this poem, no matter how many times, always helps me. Thank you for making it for others to see!
I feel you. I lost my grandmother too last fall and she was very special to me. She was very kind and loving. I called her everyday just to talk to her and tell her things going on with me and how I was feeling. She was always willing to listen. It's one of the main things I miss about her.
How I feel for you in the writing of this poem. I have recently lost my husband to cancer and now my beloved daughter-in-law has been diagnosed with cancer of the brain. Cancer is so cruel. Well done you being able to write about it. Best wishes, Ann.
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