Summer Poem

I am a 14 year old girl that wrote this poem expressing how I feel about the sun.

The Sun

The sun is a vibrant, radiant yellow ray of light
That shines through the world
In everyone's sight
It is so amazing because of it bright beauty
Just one little star
That shine all morning and evening
But not through the night
No one can see it clearly cause it's high, high
Height
However, its still extraordinary I must say
And it gives me might, might, might

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Published: May 2008

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